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"By a Thread" - section 5 `Miriam`

Jan 20, 2016 14:57

( Miriam )

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deafield January 25 2016, 02:41:45 UTC

This was the most unplanned scene I think I`ve written so far. Trying to figure out Miriam is definitely a challenge. The idea is, she can`t physically do much in the material realm but has gotten reallllllly good at faking it. Like she couldn`t of really hurt Peter with the Pen (though the inking pen are the ones with the really sharp tips from what I remember). I probably will take out the part with him bleeding. Honestly I`m probably gonna rewrite the whole scene over in third person.lol

And thanks! Glad I got a few witty lines in.lol And yeah, Peter would. Miriam has been haunting him pretty much the moment she died. Imagine all the fun banter I could create.

And yeah, I will eventually write a piece from Peter. He is still sort of a mystery to me though. I mean I know everything about him but not how he thinks. This story has....around 12 or so in-depth characters I want to explore so its a bit overwhelming but i`m slowly working on it.

Thanks again a ton for reviewing. It means a lot (though I`m sure you already get that. lol )

ladybows_fs January 26 2016, 06:18:13 UTC

Oh, it's no problem at all!

Do you have other characters in this who are dead, or is it just her?

deafield January 26 2016, 06:34:53 UTC

I haven`t quite decided yet. There technically would be many others, but she is probably the main person I would focus on.

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