DEAREST - 2(B)/?

Aug 09, 2012 15:49

Title: Dearest
Chapter: 2(B)/?
Author(s): xadowangel & deadlyscarlet
Beta: veroxion
Genre: AU/ Romance/ Angst/ Smut(in later chapters)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, Incest, Rape, Obsessive Compulsive Disorder, Post-traumatic stress, Amnesia, Violence, Delinquency, Bullying, Religion, Mentions of Yakuza, Use of real names
Characters: Kouyou, Yuu, Takanori, Akira, Yutaka, and ( Read more... )

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cursedhurricane August 9 2012, 13:10:51 UTC
Sweet Jesus you should have seen me spazzing when I saw your update yesterday before going to bed, then waking up to see another chapter yay ♥

So sorry for the previous chap, I couldn't comment but I'll do briefly here.
Hm I feel that Kouyou is blinded by the whole religious thing. During that speech against homoerotic relationships (& then incest), he was attentive, sure, but it's like Kouyou goes to religion to find the stability and protection it ensures because his brother can't do that anymore. At least, it's how I feel it. What surprised me is, it didn't even cross his mind to imagine himself making the forbidden. And it showed Kouyou's innocence to a great extent.

About this chapter, the teaser made me go all "omg some action this soon??" but you fooled me girls lol.
I particularly appreciated Yuu's boldness for once, how human he is, giving up slowly to his torturing desires.
Takanori's arrival is another reason why Yuu is going to take advantage of Kouyou.
I don't have any peculiar opinion about Hikari (other than that I like her name lol, "light"). She's not very charismatic (but then it's obvious you girls wanted her to be like this), and well, I guess she's soon going to be Yuu's prey.

I'd be as confused as Kouyou to be honest. There's no hint of comfort in Yuu's demeanor but the fact he warned the entire academy not to lay a finger on his brother.
Those bitches let out a major information for Kouyou to see his brother through a new prism.

But IDK if he's going to overcome the pain inflicted through various people this easily to forgive his brother.
I'm really curious about Yuu & Kouyou's next encounter and how our blondie is going to act in front of him now he knows few things...

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK GIRLS. I simply adore this story ♥

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deadlyscarlet August 9 2012, 13:49:36 UTC
I did promise a Dearest update didn't I? ^^

It's okay u didn't comment in the previous chapter coz ur long comment here suffices tat ♥

Yes more like Kouyou is feeling all alone due to Yuu's sudden coldness..he was raised a strict Catholic anyway so i guess he finds some solace in the Bible..Kouyou is a pretty, innocent thing

LOL well if Yuu had done something like that right then it wud've caused him terrible trouble and Kouyou wud've only been confused i guess..i don't think he'll we be very happy abt the kiss...

Yes more like a sweet, innocent, motherly girl who Kouyou depends on due to his loneliness...Xadow chose her name..it suits her personality ^^

yes those bitches did..now Kouyou is back to square one..torn between love and hate for his brother...

thank u once again for the long comment dear Cursed ♥ we'll be posting the last part tomorrow..hope u'll like that too ^^

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