Damaged Goods - Un_love_you/Prompt 11

May 09, 2008 02:06

Title: Damaged goods
Author: ladydeadlock 
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Suzie Costello, mention of Owen Harper - Suzie/Owen
Prompt: Prompt 11 of un_love_you  : Thought I needed this.
Word count: 802
Rating: R
Author's notes: Thanks to mistojen  for the thorough beta-read.

Damaged Goods )

het, torchwood, fic: un_love_you

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rodlox May 9 2008, 02:21:24 UTC
*sniffle*

can I give Suzie a hug?

(and you wrote superbly*

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shadowpiranha May 9 2008, 02:26:35 UTC
Aww, thank you so much! =)

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shadowpiranha May 9 2008, 02:48:18 UTC
You are too awesome for words.
A great part of this fic is your doing, so thank you so much for the love, the support, and the help. <3

PS: Well Owen was barely there... =P I can't write Owen. Good thing this is a first-person fic.

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welshvowels_x May 9 2008, 19:31:49 UTC
ooh, i love it! ♥

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shadowpiranha May 9 2008, 23:04:38 UTC
Thank you so much! =)

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timelordcons May 9 2008, 19:51:20 UTC
This was brilliant, really in Suzie's voice :)

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shadowpiranha May 9 2008, 23:05:11 UTC
Thanks so much for reading, and I'm glad you think I tapped into her, means a lot!

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criccieth May 9 2008, 19:51:24 UTC
given we only see Suzie for two episodes, I am really impressed - you really seem to have her down well. I can HEAR this as an internal monologue - it sounds very similar to how she talks to Jack just before she shoot herself in "Everything Changes".

well done!

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shadowpiranha May 9 2008, 23:06:20 UTC
That's where I got the inspiration for her "voice", honestly. Thanks so much for reading, and thank you for having liked it! =)

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