hey baby won't you look my way (1/1)
baekhyun/sehun → pg-13 → 4.5k → figures that the one guy baekhyun would actually be interested in dating doesn’t share mutual feelings. (vampire!au) → this fic took me forever to write bc im a piece of shit procrastinator but its here! written originally for beefnbubbletea
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first of all: "ITS TERRIBLE I PROMISE...." was a blatant LIE. i honestly loved it so much?? like at first i was kind of confused about what was going on with the lip ring and the neck compliments...and then it clicked...because....vampires....and i swear i'm only slightly stupid, but the revelation was soSO satisfying. i really enjoyed how you didn't outright say /vampire/ because the vague hints were wonderful and just?? the lead on was amazing.
jongdae's snark was so refreshing, your jongdae always gives me butterflies sighs. also sehun was so charming?!! i was in love almost immediately so i honestly don't blame bbh for being so smitten. jongin being, well, jongin was also wonderful and i'm just!! so happy!!
baekhyun the insecure mopey loser was also a highlight and they were so cute under the blanket....watching a movie all wrapped up like little sausages....my heart... ANYWAYS it's safe to say that i really truly love this and wow this comment is super embarrassing but !!! you're such a talented immersive writer. the little details?? are perfect and so are YOU
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I DIDN'T KNOW HOW TO JUST DECLARE THAT VAMPIRES WERE A THING I WANTED IT TO JUST SEEM LIKE A NORMAL PART OF THE FIC'S SOCIETY.. SOME PEOPLE ARE JUST VAMPIRES... GOTTA DEAL W/ IT... and ur not dumb u figured it out so that's nice. im proud of u [[thumbs up emoji]]
touches my face shyly.. im glad you liked jongdae... i was worried he wasn't likeable I ALWAYS WRITE HIM WEIRD... I LOVE HIM THO... Sehun my noodle son must be charming...
i literally... pulled this fic out of my ass... i rewrote it like four times... ask anyone... BUT IM GLAD YOU LIKED IT.... THANK YOU FOR SUCH A CUTE COMMETN ILY
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