Thanks again to everyone who helped me peer edit my scholarship essay. I felt like it was a lot stronger after the editing process was done. There's only one thing left to do. This scholarship is a little bit different than other scholarships because other people vote for the winner. So please PLEASE go vote for my essay
here. It will only take a moment of your time!
THANK YOU!
P.S. If you could have your friends vote too that would be a great help! The more votes, the better!!!!!!