I used to write like this. And back then people have told me that they found it too tedious to read, that I was being too cryptic and I'm not narrating enough.
"It's so poetic, I don't get it."
I used to think I was a decent writer, and from what I knew back then I really was. But people kept on telling me how much I sucked and how they hated my writing. So I stopped. I stopped and now I can't go back. The things I post now are monotonous, boring beyond belief, and I don't know how I can go back to writing like I did before.
This sucks. My writing sucks.