Constructive criticism please!

[ddetroit]

So i am messing around with this new music production program i just received. I made a work in progress track, and i want a little feed back from some random people. If you would like to hear this work in progress(less then 2 minutes right now), reply to this with your email address, and i will send it to you. Mind you this is a 16.1MB File, so high speed Internet would be recommended.

Constructive criticism more then welcome!

thanks!!