First draft of my résumé. (Ah, delicious procrastination.) I'd appreciate any feedback. I'm wondering specifically: Is it too filled with astro jargon? Too conversational in tone? Overlong/overshort research descriptions? Am I following the guy I stole the LaTeX template from too slavishly (i.e. do I really need the thesis titles)? Would I be totally crazy to add another section to show my MCM award and Putnam score? How about GPAs?
(Oh, and I haven't spellchecked it or anything yet, so don't worry about that.)