Comments | dbsk_flashfic: the boys i mean are not refined. (open challenge; drabble challenge 12: intersections)

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the boys i mean are not refined. (open challenge; drabble challenge 12: intersections)

May 18, 2008 15:14

title the boys i mean are not refined.
author sunfever.
word count 677.
concrit hit me.
pairing jaejoong/changmin, jaejoong+yoochun.
a/n so, so gratuitous. e. e. cummings title. and hi, shay, again.

( jaejoong says his order wrong, spills his glass of water, and the people around them are starting to notice that he and yoochun are playing footsie under the table. )

c: open challenge, c: intersections, a: sleepish

Comments 77

kallistei May 18 2008, 19:26:56 UTC

Hi Lindachu hiiiii. :D

♥ Jaejoong is fail and this is the way it must always be.

sleepish May 18 2008, 19:32:48 UTC

'sup, shaytle.

jaejoong wins sometimes. like, in his head and stuff. :|

forgot: ♥!

kallistei May 18 2008, 19:34:52 UTC

I love you lots. :)

He dreams it often and in vivid detail, 'strue.

supsunshine May 18 2008, 20:34:07 UTC

OMG I love your nervoustotallyfail!Jae xD

sleepish May 18 2008, 23:40:11 UTC

haha, thank you!

hay_linny May 18 2008, 22:36:08 UTC

this place is high class wallet rape, yoochun - best start to a fic ever, really. your jae is adorable, and he does exactly what my friends and i do in high class restaurants when we spot a very rare handsome asian dude XD

sleepish May 18 2008, 23:53:25 UTC

i would love to spot a changmin in a high class restaurant. or anywhere. and thank you for reading! :)

thevirginia May 18 2008, 23:30:33 UTC

at first glance, shim changmin is stunning. at second glance, he is still really stunning. he stays really fucking stunning for every glance after that.
YES. JUST YES. Oh Changmin! *swoons*

jaejoong scrambles back around. "he's coming over here he's coming over here hurry act like we're talking intelligently."
LOLS INTELLIGENTLY! Good one, Jaejoong. Good one.

this was so cute! :D

sleepish May 18 2008, 23:55:07 UTC

jaejoong + intelligence = lol nice try.

thank you!

illuminations May 19 2008, 01:05:29 UTC

Jaejoong is such a loser. ♥

YAY ENABLING.

sleepish May 19 2008, 01:10:42 UTC

a loser with great arms.

i am so easy.

illuminations May 19 2008, 01:15:04 UTC

Ummmmyes. :| Maybe Changmin should've torn off Jaejoong's sleeve and written his number on Jae's arm.

Easy as pie.

sleepish May 19 2008, 01:22:24 UTC

alternate ending!

i'm yummy too. :|

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