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Dead Air :: response to drabble challenge 9: epiphany

Apr 11, 2008 23:02

Title: Dead Air
Author: dbdbyeah
Word Count: 150
Concrit?: yes, please. this wasn't beta'd. :c
Pairing: Yunho / Junsu

A/N: i haven't written anything in a long time. this is dedicated to aoireeza, coz she's my hosu, jaesu, muse and she might not be feeling too good right now. *hugs* written while listening to Sarah Bareilles' GRAVITY.

may or may not come after ( Read more... )

c: epiphany, a: halfkissed

Comments 23

onew April 11 2008, 15:40:28 UTC

But Yunho wasn’t suppose to mind that he wasn’t, either.
ouch.
this was lovely, honey.♥ and thanks for writing for me. love you much.

dbdbyeah April 11 2008, 15:45:49 UTC

i love you too..

i know this is so cliche.. dang. but... i hope you feel better soon. and i'm just here if you need to talk. *hugs*

kallistei April 11 2008, 15:59:48 UTC

Sigh, Yunho. Sigh! I liked this, and it rang true to a lot of how I see Yunho.

Just a couple of concrit things, though. 'Putting up appearances' is a bit of a mixed metaphor, and I think your last sentence should read, '...Yunho wasn't supposed to mind...'.

dbdbyeah April 11 2008, 16:02:44 UTC

yunho's just...... *sigh*

thank you for the concrit! i've changed "suppose" already... i don't know what to do with "putting up appearances" tho. > < but i'll change it once i figure it out.

thanks again... <3

dbdbyeah April 11 2008, 16:03:37 UTC

keeping up apperances, maybe? would it work? *isstumped*

kallistei April 11 2008, 16:04:41 UTC

Yeah, I was just about to suggest that. :)

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ara_niey April 11 2008, 16:09:58 UTC

aww~poor yunnie..

dbdbyeah April 11 2008, 16:13:05 UTC

he kinda brought it upon himself.. *sighs* oh wae must i write broken hosu? -_-

ara_niey April 24 2008, 13:19:37 UTC

ohh~i didn't noticed this is related to last hosu and jaesu..
yunnie deserved it then..*sigh*

melodeon_effect April 11 2008, 17:18:42 UTC

*sigh* Yunho just stop and go to him! ;_;

this is still me, dbdbyeah.... i promise. lol. halfkissed April 18 2008, 13:23:31 UTC

let's push him towards junsu... naooooooo. *cries*

XD I've stalked you enough to know XDDD ...opps LOL melodeon_effect April 18 2008, 14:40:49 UTC

YES! *pushes Yunho toward a waiting Su*

morninglory17 April 11 2008, 18:57:30 UTC

Aww, Yunho...not supposed to mind, but he does...
HoSu<3

this is still me, dbdbyeah.... i promise. lol. halfkissed April 18 2008, 13:23:55 UTC

i really need to write a happy hosu for a change... raaawr. <3