Reset (response to first drabble challenge 1: beginnings)

[darknessgryphon]

No matter what happened the day before- be it a horrible new hairstyle, over-long hours of practice, endless recording, injury- any sort of bad mood of Junsu's fades with the first rays of the rising sun.

By that time, Jaejoong is in the kitchen making breakfast, Yunho is rousing Yoochun and Changmin and peace reins for a brief

Comments

[wmelon_kaiye]

Despite what the fic seems to be promoting, it's an awfully sad concept.
I like it but it also breaks my heart. XD

[darknessgryphon]

:: patches up heart:: I suppose it is somewhat sad; I actually didn't see it from that angle until you commented.

[onew]

this is really simple and touching. :D be careful with your tenses, though. make sure you use only one tense all the way. tense parallelism is very essential in delivering a good story. :D nevertheless, this is wonderful.♥

[darknessgryphon]

Ah the tenses! I do always try to pay attention to my grammer, but it's always tense hopping that gets me.

[kallistei]

That's a very sweet idea.

Just one thing I spotted:
smiles- With would probably read slightly better as "smiles; with"

[kallistei]

And because I'm forgetful:
My mod-persona needs to remind you that a drabble is 100 words exactly, and a double drabble is 200 exactly, so this doesn't technically fit the guidelines.

[darknessgryphon]

I think I'll try to expand it into a double drabble to make it fit within the guidelines; I can't figure out where to cut it to squish it into a drabble.