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silentaspara in dbsk_flashfic

Sudden Revelation (response to drabble challenge 9: Epiphany)

Apr 05, 2008 13:48

[Title] Sudden Revelation
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Comments 7

[Mod] kallistei April 5 2008, 07:46:13 UTC

Hey, d'you mind restoring the font color to default please?

Also, concrit-wise, you've got a typo in the penultimate paragraph. I really liked the idea of the story, though. Changmin realising he's not alone is love. :)

Re: [Mod] silentaspara April 5 2008, 13:18:31 UTC

No, I don't mind, except that it doesn't seem to work when I want the colour to return to default. Gargh, I think I'll go retype the entire thing out.

Ah, found the mistake.

Thank you very much!

Re: [Mod] kallistei April 5 2008, 17:34:44 UTC

Thank you! But I'm going to bother you again to take the extra white space between the header and the story out, if you could.

Re: [Mod] silentaspara April 6 2008, 13:55:58 UTC

Haha, no prob.

I think LJ hates me, I must really get the need to keep re-editing squashed.

:) Done.

Thread 5

oldwillow_brook April 10 2008, 06:24:19 UTC

Tear-jerking and absolutely satisfying.

This was fanstastic!

♥!

silentaspara April 10 2008, 14:46:37 UTC

xD Thank you very much!