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ereluna in dbsk_flashfic

flashing lights (flashfic challenge: wound)

Sep 14, 2010 23:28

Title: flashing lights
Author: ereluna
Word-count: 1000
Rating: PG-13
Concrit? Yes, please.
Warnings: General angst-making, a little violence.
Summary: The third strike is the last, and though Yunho expects it, it hurts the most.

( Today, Changmin's lips say one thing, but his eyes say something else. )

a: ereluna, c: wound

Comments 2

keiko_kirin September 16 2010, 03:10:11 UTC

Wow! Very powerful and atmospheric. I think it matches well with the prompt. Poor Yunho~~ I can really feel his confusion and sense of helplessness here.

ereluna September 17 2010, 01:38:35 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you think so! ^___^