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Shangri-la (Open Challenge: Afterlife)

Aug 15, 2010 02:33

Title: Shangri-la
Author: ephemeral_blue
Word count: 230
Concrit?: Yes
Pairing: Jaejoong/Yunho
Rating: G
Warning: Character Death

( Shangri-la )

a: ephemeral_blue, c: open challenge, c: afterlife

Comments 6

nevaeh86 August 15 2010, 10:10:32 UTC

I think you just broke my heart with this.

gompi August 16 2010, 02:04:29 UTC

poor Hoho ):

yay Jaechun? boo jaechun

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ephemeral_blue August 24 2010, 09:46:48 UTC

Awww! That is a compliment XD thank you for reading!!!

keiko_kirin August 24 2010, 00:07:30 UTC

Ooooh! The contrast between paradise and earth is so chilling! I feel so sad for Yunho! ;_;

ephemeral_blue August 24 2010, 09:47:20 UTC

My poor Yunho ): Thank you so much for reading! XD

ghina93 February 3 2012, 22:06:04 UTC

I thought this was gonna be a happy one but never mind lol

When the scene shifts to yunho, its like this cloud of dread just came over me. Beautiful writing!