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Believer (Flashfic Challenge 46: I don't believe in angels)

Apr 18, 2010 05:40

Title: Believer
Author: beauty0fparting
Word Count: 567
Concrit: Sure
Rating: G
A/N: I didn't have the time to edit so please excuse typos.

( 'I think,' Jaejoong looks at him with eyes that suddenly turn into a microscope, scrutinizing every nanosecond of Yoochun's history, checking under every rock of his psychology, '...you're a believer.' )

a: beauty0fparting, c: i don't believe in angels

Comments 20

shinchul303 April 18 2010, 17:59:26 UTC

spot.

you got me at "vomit-inducing fluff"

shinchul303 April 18 2010, 18:02:42 UTC

Ah, that was a nice ending! [and now I must run somewhere REAL quick].

beauty0fparting April 18 2010, 21:59:30 UTC

thanks! im glad you liked it! ^^

only4dbsk April 18 2010, 19:31:30 UTC

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this was so so so cute!

and JaeChun is my OTP so i love this even more!!!!!

*sigh*

you got my heart all warm and fluttering now <3

beauty0fparting April 18 2010, 22:00:52 UTC

^^ Jaechun is my OTP too! haha. glad you liked it! ^^

gacktprince2008 April 19 2010, 00:52:28 UTC

luv it

beauty0fparting April 19 2010, 05:00:47 UTC

thanks! ^^

keiko_kirin April 19 2010, 01:19:07 UTC

I like this :)

beauty0fparting April 19 2010, 05:01:01 UTC

i'm glad you did! ^^

shinchul303 April 19 2010, 02:12:27 UTC

Moar?

beauty0fparting April 19 2010, 05:01:30 UTC

i'll try... if i have time. ^^