Frost (flashfic challenge 34: feel small)

[twhitesakura]

Title: Frost
Author: twhitesakura
Word count: 375
Concrit?: Yes
Pairing: Yoochun/Jaejoong hints
Rating: PG
Summary: Yoochun sleeps with the windows open.

Comments

[holystardown]

awww... i really liked this ^^ i don't know why but it seemed really sweet somehow. ((like i said, idk)) and it just seems so... yoochunish ;P
PeAcE

[twhitesakura]

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you liked it. ♥

[gomentilltheend]

Short. Simple. Sweet.

Nice work!

[twhitesakura]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

[shadowbaerchen]

It´s so sweet how you described the two brothers sleeping <33 I really can imagine it ^^.

May I ask a question? oo
What short cuts are there for the ratings? And what does concrit means? ^^°

[twhitesakura]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Many communities use the American movie rating system and I use them too for fic:

G - General Audiences (Anyone can watch the movieread the fic, even children)
PG - Parental Guidance suggested (Kids can watch read, but a parent might want to come along)
PG-13 - For ages 13 and older
R - For adults
NC-17 - For ages 17 or older. Usually this rating means there is extreme violence or sex in the movie fic.

Ratings let readers avoid stories that they might feel uncomfortable with.

Concrit is short for "constructive criticism." If the author is okay with concrit, this means that readers can tell the author what they think the author can do to improve the fic or the author's writing (and the author won't get mad or feel hurt).

[shadowbaerchen]

aahh~ I see ^^ thanks for your explanations ^^.

[twhitesakura]

Oh, and to make it clearer: A parent can bring their child to a R-rated movie (even though he/she shouldn't), but he/she definitely cannot bring their child to a NC-17 one! xD