a map for those who know (Flashfic Challenge 16: Steal Me)

[kallistei]

Title: a map for those who know
Author: kallistei
Pairing: Yoochun/Changmin
Word count: 1281
Concrit?: Always.
Summary: I drew a map so we can get home or maybe come back here in the summer
Author's Notes: AU, vaguely inspired by Supernatural. For junkojjang.

Comments

[xiahtic]

*is ninja!* i'll bet that flashing on our im is the link to this isn't it? :DDDD *is gud ninja*

[kallistei]

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[xiahtic]

why always with the dots :(

[kallistei]

Because they are good allpurpose things!

[dapdaphae]

I really liked this.

Changmin sounds miles away when he answers, and Yoochun sort of hates it. Always has, even before he knew Changmin was leaving him.

This, especially, tugged on my heart, esp since I'm just a freshman and the bittersweet feeling from friends and loved ones going their separate ways hits close to home. Beautiful :)

♥

[kallistei]

Thank you! :)

[kallistei]

Thanks for commenting! :)

[yuxo]

that is so...just...

the english language has yet to make up a good enough adjective for your writing. :l

♥

[kallistei]

Um. That was totally not the comment I was expecting, but thank you for the lovely compliment!

[yuxo]

OOOOOOOOO:!!!!!!! WHY!

...askdfjweoispoiuxlkjxjkvcxjsadfjalsfdj DIES.

WERE YOU EXPECTING KEYSMASH? ;_; LDSJFKDSJFEWPLUPSLDLSKFDLKJSFD. I JUST WANTED TO BE COHERENT ONCE. ;_;

no, but really. :l just watching Changmin sleep until the fireflies come out and Changmin wakes up of his own accord, sleepy and content enough not to yell. Instead he curls himself in against Yoochun for a lazy kiss, then says, "Take me home, Yoochun.

favorite part ever. :l ♥

[kallistei]

Hee. I didn't object to the coherency at all! I was just surprised. And maybe a little worried that I broke you. :\

:)) Thanks!

[shinchul303]

I love the undercurrent in all this...

"I will pretend to be completely normal," Changmin replies, deadpan, and Yoochun bursts out laughing.

"Yeah, good luck with that, alien boy."

Changmin's hand tightens on his leg, suddenly a lot less like comforting and more like threatening. "I can break you with my mind," Changmin reminds..."

Why do I totally believe he's telling the truth? And the strange fights and allusions to attacks and watching each other's backs; the amulet and, and

There's so much potential for more here. Curious minds (mine!) want to know.

[kallistei]

Thank you! And yes, my hint-dropping is blatant. XD There may be more, one day.