I love the relationship between Yunho and Yoochun and how it was subtle, but still clearly there, especially when Yoochun was dying and didn't want to let go of Yunho's hand...From then on, I couldn't help but tear-up as I read the rest.
I really enjoyed this and the ending was so perfect ♥
Thank you so much for the nice comment and I'm really glad that you enjoyed reading it even though it is quite a sad story.
I am also very happy to read that you enjoyed the ending as I hesitated a long time over whether to leave it like that or not. I just wasn't sure if this was too abrupt a ending or not, so this is reassuring :)
Oh my god, seriously? ;-; You're one of the few DBSK writers who make me keysmash almost every time they release a story because I always think your stories are just perfect so to get a comment like this, oh god thank you really, thank you!
I am sorry to hear about your loss. When I started writing this story, I did as much research as I could so that Yoochun's feelings would feel as realistic as possible. I just hope that I managed to portray the good moments as well as the sadder ones.
And you're very welcome, but thank you for taking the time to read it and comment and rec it ♥
Though I am at work and should be working, I read this and will probably read again when I get home so I can sob openly whilst reading like I wanted to do during parts of this story!
This sotry is so very well written! I loved it. Thank you.
seriously... yesterday and today i've read 2 two-shots (one for each day) and had ended up crying because of (1) heartwarming-tugging-wrenching happy ending after the angsty middle part of the story and (2) heartache-tugging-wrenching bittersweetness cause in this story, chun died but he kind of made sure that yunho will find someone that he will learn to love...
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really. i'm still crying right now... but thank you so much for a great story!
I'd say I'm sorry that this made you cry, but since it's the effect I was looking for, I'm quite happy to hear this as it means I managed to successfully reach my goal XD
Thank you for reading and the sweet comment. It's very appreciated :)
I love the plot and storyline. It's bittersweet with the parting of Yoochun and that both him and Yunho never got a chance to confess their feelings to each other face to face.
However, I believe that fate and Yoochun both wanted to make sure that Yunho was ok that's why he met Felix and heard that song.
This is beautifully heartbreaking. I loved the pacing and how I could just picture everything that happened like in a movie. There's a tinge of regret for me because they never got to confess but I understand Yoochun's reasoning. . .
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I love the relationship between Yunho and Yoochun and how it was subtle, but still clearly there, especially when Yoochun was dying and didn't want to let go of Yunho's hand...From then on, I couldn't help but tear-up as I read the rest.
I really enjoyed this and the ending was so perfect ♥
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I am also very happy to read that you enjoyed the ending as I hesitated a long time over whether to leave it like that or not. I just wasn't sure if this was too abrupt a ending or not, so this is reassuring :)
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I am sorry to hear about your loss. When I started writing this story, I did as much research as I could so that Yoochun's feelings would feel as realistic as possible. I just hope that I managed to portray the good moments as well as the sadder ones.
And you're very welcome, but thank you for taking the time to read it and comment and rec it ♥
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Though I am at work and should be working, I read this and will probably read again when I get home so I can sob openly whilst reading like I wanted to do during parts of this story!
This sotry is so very well written! I loved it. Thank you.
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seriously... yesterday and today i've read 2 two-shots (one for each day) and had ended up crying because of (1) heartwarming-tugging-wrenching happy ending after the angsty middle part of the story and (2) heartache-tugging-wrenching bittersweetness cause in this story, chun died but he kind of made sure that yunho will find someone that he will learn to love...
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really. i'm still crying right now... but thank you so much for a great story!
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I'd say I'm sorry that this made you cry, but since it's the effect I was looking for, I'm quite happy to hear this as it means I managed to successfully reach my goal XD
Thank you for reading and the sweet comment. It's very appreciated :)
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I love the plot and storyline.
It's bittersweet with the parting of Yoochun and that both him and Yunho never got a chance to confess their feelings to each other face to face.
However, I believe that fate and Yoochun both wanted to make sure that Yunho was ok that's why he met Felix and heard that song.
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I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)
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I really love this, I'll put this in my memories!
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and oh god I know. Even I felt bad for a while over the fact that I didn't write them confessing to each other lol
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