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mearii87 December 2 2010, 21:36:41 UTC
Thank you! I was trying to go for a "being at peace" feeling so this makes me sooo happy :)

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itsplashes November 29 2010, 02:41:47 UTC
I love this so much and I wasn't even thinking of any parallels to real life or anything when I was reading it. I thought you painted the ot5 so well. And I enjoyed the differences in Yunjae's and Yoomin's relationships. The way Junsu has them all fawning over him, hngh.;; This was like a rollercoaster of emotions. The world you created for them is so beautiful.

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mearii87 December 2 2010, 21:39:02 UTC
Thank you so much. I'd never written yoomin, but I really wanted to, just to try something new, so your comment makes me irrationally happy.

This world is my baby. <3

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supersonicjaz November 29 2010, 11:35:42 UTC
Amazing is the only word that comes to mind.

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mearii87 December 2 2010, 22:07:44 UTC
Thank you so much :)

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yuukihitohira November 30 2010, 01:12:34 UTC
honestly left me speechless. beautiful ♥

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mearii87 December 2 2010, 22:08:04 UTC
Thank you. It's making me so happy that there are people that liked this :)

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michyitaly December 1 2010, 21:50:07 UTC
This was so...beautiful. And well written. And unique. I dunno what to say, really, but this piece of writing made me dream while I was reading it. The setting is so peculiar, and the multiple layers of the story with all its hidden meanings made the reading experience really enjoyable. I could recognize some metaphores -like the fireflies and the place past the secondary track- but I was totally clueless about the others. I like to think that in the end Yunho decides to follow Jae...and that leaving the track is for the best, just like I hope that in RL the decisions the guys've made have really brought them the happiness they surely deserve ^^

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mearii87 December 2 2010, 22:09:28 UTC
I guess it's good that not all my metaphors were obvious. An allegory not always is, at least the kinds I like to read. More like you get an impression of events, and that's what I was going for.

I think we all want them to be happy. That's really how I'm getting through this: just telling myself that they're happy, at least for now. <3

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