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Mar 25, 2007 22:56


I'm taking a survey. Is this good descriptive flavor text or not?

A section of deeper darkness coalesces from the shadows around it, gradually taking humanoid form and gliding
towards you effortlessly without any perceptible means of locomotion.
The man who stands before you is tall and slender with a dark and brooding complexion; pale skin framed by a mane of

exquisitely dark raven-black hair which reaches down to the middle of his back. His features are sharp and defined,
as if hewn out of solid rock. The eyes are pools of deepest crimson and seem to ebb and shift supernaturally
in the subtle lighting lending the disturbing sensation of explosive motion cloaked in absolute stillness.

The man's demeanor is firm, backed by his ramrod comportment; a bearing of almost noble stature.
And yet he virtually exudes an atmosphere of violence from every pore, soaking the surrounding environment
with it, making the spiritual ether heavy with its weight; a palpable thirst for bloodshed.

His upper body is clothed in an ebon leather doublet with countless straps passing over and under one another
in a criss-cross manner. An outer cloak of midnight blue conceals the remainder of his frame.
Tight and fitting pants of black leather continue his attire down to the knees. A pair of black leather
riding boots adorn his feet, and the hilts of two barely discernable blades may be observed at his waist.

When he moves, it is with utter certainty and an effortless grace and sense of balance which defies
the violence he insinuates. His voice floats to you on the night breeze, soft low and smooth, and yet somehow
ominous at the same time; oddly coinciding with his appearance. For it too, seems to contain the pent up
destructive impulse concealed within his physical form.
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