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[Fic] Eyeshield 21 - More Than Words

Nov 20, 2011 18:57

Title: More Than Words
Author: dayofcaligula
Ratings/Warnings: Wholesome, not so naughty NC-17.
Pairing/Character(s): Unsui Kongo/Karin Koizumi
Fandom: Eyeshield 21
Disclaimer: I don't own Eyeshield 21 or any of its characters.
Summary: After washing his hands, Unsui kneeled in front of her as she sat on their bathroom counter, dragged his hand through her leg up to ( Read more... )

fanfic, es21, unsuikarin

Comments 8

cherry_tiger November 21 2011, 02:36:38 UTC

I love this! If there's one thing that really draws me to your fanon of this pairing, is how gentle and loving both Unsui and Karin are, and their tender moments as you've written here is just fascinating to see. And the smut was so well done that you can tell it was all out of pure love!

Thank you so much for this. It's convinced me that I can write smut in a way that isn't tacky or just added in for the heck of it. You're amazing, and I really hope you continue writing! Seriously, at this rate, I may even venture into writing a one shot for this pairing!

dayofcaligula November 21 2011, 14:15:17 UTC

You know you're most welcome! I am in love with these two more than my berry needs, really.

I did edit this story (and struggled with it because I know I had to study, but it doesn't want to go away in my mind) as these two were talking too much in my head. Initially, this was a story for the porn, but Unsui/Karin acted their way out of the naughty stuff. I didn't want it to come out as too much of a fluff so I ended with this version!

I hope you also noticed how these two aren't perfect, that they try to compromise on things that won't change about them by talking-feeling-being understanding about it.

No worries, I won't stop writing unless the worst case scenario happens. Unsui/Karin has been my ship for the past 2 years now (I think), and my muse just wouldn't leave me be. But I do ran out of ideas and randomly get them back so if you have a request I'd gladly assess on whether or not I can make it!

I'm also pleased that this has motivated you! Wherever your story may go, I won't stop loving Wait For MeP.S. Much love and kisses ( ... )

cherry_tiger November 22 2011, 09:32:27 UTC

Oh, they're definitely far from perfect, especially with Unsui who worries about Karin needlessly to the point of self-sacrifice. But I like that despite their flaws, there's this quiet understanding and acceptance between them both ( ... )

dayofcaligula November 22 2011, 13:24:42 UTC

Unsui's also conflicted about his being someone who wishes to do things on his own (he used to be solitary with a mission to help his brother Agon shine, and that generally he doesn't want/need help from others for the perception that it would mainly be a bother for others and that he finds it wrong to ask for help over something that he can do on his own capacity) with his selflessness. I find this very interesting about him ( ... )

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