Cliched or not, I love it. All this wonderful UST finally dissolved. I love especially the moment when Holmes tells Watson that he was the cause for his disappearance - yes! :)
Thank you! I'm a sucker for the moment when UST is finally realized, and there is just so much potential at the moment when Holmes' returns. I'm thrilled that you liked it.
Beautiful! Cliché, shmiché. No need to be nervous, I'd never have thought this was your first H/W fic. Your Watson voice is excellent. There are too many bits I love to list them here, but the overall mixture of tender and hot and deeply loving is simply breathtaking. Brava! (And I'm a sucker for snuggling, so thank you for indulging me.)
Now, of course, you'll have to write more, you understand. :-)
Thank you so much! I was quite nervous posting this since I'm so new to the fandom. I'm especially concerned with trying to find their voices, and I'm relieved that you thought that Watson's worked. And I definitely want to write more -- I think I've found my new favorite fandom! I'm so glad you liked my fic.
Beautiful work! I loved how Watson used Holmes' first name, that's not found too often in fics, lol. Perfectly done, I wouldn't have been able to tell it was your first story if you hadn't told us.~Sophia
Really, no need to be nervous. While I've definitely seen elements of this story before, I wouldn't call them clichés--they show up so often because they fit the situation so well. Brava!
Woo hoo! Thanks so much for your kind words. There is definitely a lot of emotion to be explored regarding "The Return". I just felt compelled to write something about it, and I really enjoyed making my first foray into this fandom. I'll definitely have to work some more fics.
Thank you so much Rakina! I've completely fallen in love with this fandom, and I really enjoyed writing my first Holmes fic. I'm trying to push myself to write more lately (I've been suffering from a case of tormented writer's block and a lack of confidence), but it's been slow going. Knowing that people enjoy what I've created is very encouraging. *hugs back*
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Now, of course, you'll have to write more, you understand. :-)
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Really, no need to be nervous. While I've definitely seen elements of this story before, I wouldn't call them clichés--they show up so often because they fit the situation so well. Brava!
Now post more, please. ^_^
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