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day_eight

Hard Boiled Writing Samples

Jan 06, 2008 18:36

The writing samples for my hardboiled_rpg characters.

( Ulquiorra's Sample )

Comments 15

kellenanne January 7 2008, 01:20:54 UTC

*applauds* Violence. Death. Mayhem. Yumichika being Yumichika!

LOL "Behind the eight ball." I LOVE that saying; used it myself in my own sample. XD

day_eight January 7 2008, 01:25:50 UTC

I love that saying, as well. I was laughing sooo hard while writing Yumi's; the slang really cracks me up. He's going to be so much fun to write at HB.

Which reminds me...

11th DIVISION FTW!

(I keep dropping hints to Jo that we really need an Ikkaku now, and that she plays him at BB so... *cough* XD)

kellenanne January 7 2008, 01:28:55 UTC

The slang is amazing, isn't it? OMG, I had SO much fun writing up Hitsugaya's sample. Zaraki's will be even MORE so, I think.

Even if I dearly hate writing histories.

11th!! Ikkaku!! XDD

day_eight January 7 2008, 01:38:20 UTC

The histories hate me. Honestly, they do. I either can't think of a thing to put in them, or I ramble on endlessly until I look up and say, "Oh wow, when did I write fifteen pages? *edit, cut, edit*"

Zaraki using 50's slang. *DIES* OMG... so fun. At first I was glad that Ulquiorra wasn't really the kind of character who would use a ton of the slang, but now... I'm really starting to like it. (However, if I start talking like that IRL, please smack me.)

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day_eight January 7 2008, 01:40:15 UTC

Fun, for sure. <3

And... Ulqui won't bother Shuu unless Shuu gives him a reason to. (Heh... like being a double-crossing undercover agent? XP)

nnoi January 7 2008, 01:49:21 UTC

WOW those were incredible thanks for sharing!!!

day_eight January 7 2008, 02:06:15 UTC

I'm so glad you liked them; thanks for reading! <3

annieroo2 January 7 2008, 02:33:08 UTC

ROFL Oh that Yumi one totally craked me up. SO perfect. Also completely LOVED how you snuck in the trash comment without having Ulquiorra break character. No wonder you got both characters. You did a fabulous job. *hugs* good luck!

day_eight January 7 2008, 02:58:19 UTC

Thanks so much! ^.^ The Yumi one was incredibly fun to write... I don't write him in situations like that nearly enough.

I was trying to think of a way for Ulqui to say 'trash'. I'm glad it worked! *hugs*

(You know what the funniest thing is? When I sent gogochan and gogodgene Ulqui's application, it somehow ended up in their 'spam' folder. It's like the email program was like, "THIS IS TRASH!" I couldn't stop laughing. Poor Ulqui had it coming to him!)

annieroo2 January 8 2008, 03:48:08 UTC

ROFL. Hmm seems Ulquiorra's attitude is contagious to even computers.

stace_s January 7 2008, 04:07:03 UTC

The slang makes me giggle, but it sounds like a fun RPG. ^^- You need an Ikkaku though. You can't have a Yumichika without an Ikkaku (or vice versa) it's just unheard of! XD

day_eight January 7 2008, 04:15:57 UTC

I know! Yumi with no Ikka is... a sad, sad thought.

And the slang seriously made me crack up whenever I used it. I was giggling like a fool, so much that I could hardly write!

stace_s January 8 2008, 22:58:53 UTC

It IS! They're like two halves of one whole. During the Bount crap arc, it was like WTH you can't separate them like that! XD

I don't even know where the heck you'd go to learn all that goofy slang! XD

gogo_ergo_sum January 7 2008, 04:30:55 UTC

Why don't you apply for Ikka then, Stace??

XD~

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