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Fic: The Dresden Files - [The Story's End]

Apr 15, 2007 11:29

Title: “The Story’s End”
Author: Day
Beta'd for grammar by the lovely and talented goodiesfanCharacters: Bob, Harry, and OMC (original male character ( Read more... )

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Comments 34

cyloran April 15 2007, 16:01:51 UTC

I liked this very much. You have a very fine Harry!Voice. I especially loved your pointing out/demonstrating the differences between Hrothbert/Bob/Robert in relation to his masters. And awwww, I'm such a sucker for a happy ending! Well done! Looking forward to more. :)

day221b April 15 2007, 16:31:31 UTC

Thank you! Coming from you that is high praise, considering how much I think of your work. I was really nervous about this one, but the muse wouldn't let me be. Thank you, again!

beachkid April 15 2007, 17:41:46 UTC

oh, i like this one. :D fabulous. subtly heartbreaking (i mean, harry! what a beautiful death scene. gosh. and poor bob, really, with harry gone.) and invigorating fun. slash glasses were definitely in place, but i really liked the play-by-play regardless. (but the slash glasses helped. *g*) harry's voice is brilliant, and 'robert''s revenge on blaine, and the implications therein, were chilling.

and how much do i love the implication of harry 'wearing down' the terrifying presences and such that wished bob harm? almost as much as

But I think I’d worn 'em down enough that Bob was relatively safe as long as he didn't make any sudden movements or go all badass sorcerer on them.

Of course, I was talking about Bob here.
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i'm a little confused by the timeline, but it could just be my own assumptions wrecking havoc. if Bob had worked on [blaine's] mind with a single-minded ruthlessness for more years than [harry] had been permitted to live, that would mean at least forty years, yes? murphy's still alive, so less than sixty-seventy, ( ... )

day221b April 15 2007, 19:11:36 UTC

Wow! Thank for such wonderful feedback. I'm blown away by your response to my fic.

I fixed the timeline somewhat so that I hope it reads better and is a little more plausible. Sorry about that. That was completely and utterly my bad. I'm glad you brought it to my attention. :)

Thank you again for your kind words. Who knows, with inspiration such as yours, maybe the adventures of Harry and Bob will continue ever onward. :D

ellex42 April 15 2007, 18:15:42 UTC

Absolutely riveting!

day221b April 15 2007, 19:12:44 UTC

Thank you so much!

Lovely! selmak April 15 2007, 18:21:14 UTC

that was a lovely fic. I especially enjoyed

"Actually, they were. In fact, they might have been worse. But I think I’d worn 'em down enough that Bob was relatively safe as long as he didn't make any sudden movements or go all badass sorcerer on them.

Of course, I was talking about Bob here."

That sounds like harry. Great job!!!!

Re: Lovely! day221b April 15 2007, 19:14:07 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad Harry's voice rang true for you. :)

Re: Lovely! selmak April 15 2007, 19:18:25 UTC

I also love your icon!

there's no problem if I put a link up to your story on my site? I'm in the process of making a Bob fansite, and have a section for Bob-related lovelies.

Re: Lovely! day221b April 15 2007, 19:44:25 UTC

Wow! I would be honored! Thank you!

Can I have the url? I'd love to see what other lovelies you've been able to find on the net!

Oh, and thank you for the comment about my icon. Isn't it adorable? If you visit my userpics it tells you who made it.

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courtberger April 15 2007, 19:05:25 UTC

This was excellent! I can't wait for you to write more!

C~

day221b April 15 2007, 19:16:21 UTC

Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you liked my story. The Harry & Bob muse seems exceptionally strong. I may have more stories to tell. :)