two little typos: 1. The women reached down and cracking and crunching noises filled the room. It should have been, "woman". 2. “You're eyes,” she said in wonder and then shook her head. Should have been, "Your eyes,".
I'm glad you caught those typos. I will edit and fix those as soon as I have a chance. You don't do beta work by any chance, do you? I could use another sharp pair of eyes for one of my stories that I'm getting ready to post.
Enjoyed that, haven't seen Bones so don't know the female character but Spike was undoubtably Spike!!! You'll have to do another longer fic based around this!
Just read it again and had to laugh at Spike finding that Booth looks like Angel.. I can't stand Angel but I like Booth. Go figure! You still looking for a beta? Hugs
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two little typos:
1. The women reached down and cracking and crunching noises filled the room. It should have been, "woman".
2. “You're eyes,” she said in wonder and then shook her head. Should have been, "Your eyes,".
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I'm glad you caught those typos. I will edit and fix those as soon as I have a chance. You don't do beta work by any chance, do you? I could use another sharp pair of eyes for one of my stories that I'm getting ready to post.
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The book should (hah!!) be finished by the end of January. If you need a beta after that, feel free to call on my. :-)
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You still looking for a beta?
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