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dawncrow

Fic: When You Hold A Flame (Vol 1: Track 2)

Jan 02, 2011 20:51

Series: When You Hold A Flame
Title: 4 Minutes
Pairing,Character(s): Dave Karofsky/Kurt Hummel
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 616
Spoilers: Through 1x15 (ha), eventual through 2x08, AU after that (Series)
Warnings: Lots of swearing and homophobic language, mild sexuality.
Summary: This was NOT happening. The increasingly uncomfortable tightness in Dave’ ( Read more... )

glee, kurtofsky, fic, when you hold a flame

Comments 11

anunknownlove January 3 2011, 03:44:52 UTC

Loving this fic! Poor Dave, too deep in denial.

dawncrow January 4 2011, 04:12:28 UTC

Thank you, you're lovely! :) And yes, there's lots of denial in Dave's future, poor thing.

corbly January 3 2011, 07:14:02 UTC

Loved this chapter. It both made me giggle and be sad for Dave, not to mention this reaction to 4 Minutes was totally my headcanon for him, lol.
Can't wait for the next tracks. ♥

dawncrow January 4 2011, 04:13:50 UTC

Thank you! This has always been my headcanon for him too, so it was really fun to write it out. :) Next track just went up!

justams January 3 2011, 20:15:56 UTC

Love this. In my head Dave was definetely there at this performance, and hated how much he liked it. This is such a great portrayal of what would be going through his head.

dawncrow January 4 2011, 04:15:07 UTC

Thank you! It was a lot of fun to write (this was actually the first track I decided on when I was planning this out, because I knew it would be fun, haha). I love getting in his head. Thanks again! ♥

mizvickers January 4 2011, 12:26:04 UTC

Ok, so I gave a delighted squeak when I saw the title of this and the 'spoilers'.
*snort* Dave gets pep rallies. What a gigantic useful waste of time.
Oh, Dave...he makes me both laugh and give a sadface in this. You're writing him just perfectly.
♥

dawncrow January 4 2011, 17:04:22 UTC

Ha, pep rallies are the worst. I was usually either stuck performing in them or banging my head against the wall just wanting them to be over (thankfully by senior year I figured out which teachers would let you hide in their classroom and play cards!). After NBK I just could not stop thinking about what must have been going through Dave's head during the pep rally.

So glad you're enjoying, and thank you so much! I'm so relieved that I'm keeping him IC! :)

kironomi January 8 2011, 22:53:46 UTC

God, i love how you described the way dave's thoughts came back to Karofsky. And i laughed so hard.
Really, Kurt is too sexy for his own sake.

dawncrow January 12 2011, 05:26:17 UTC

I laughed while writing this. XD It's too bad it all goes to angst after this...

And yes, he is, poor thing. Just too damn sexy. *sigh*