AMC--Chapter Twenty-Seven
I'm going to try to keep this short, for once.
I'm going to rate the chapter for general audiences, although there are some mild mentions of sexuality.
Comments and criticisms are always welcome.
Thank you for reading!
(Oh, and Friday's posting: Feanaro's PoV. Eru help us all....)
( Chapter Twenty-Seven )
I'm going to rate the chapter for general audiences, although there are some mild mentions of sexuality.
Comments and criticisms are always welcome.
Thank you for reading!
(Oh, and Friday's posting: Feanaro's PoV. Eru help us all....)
( Chapter Twenty-Seven )
I would loathe to deny any of my sons the love of a friend
I think this should be "am loathe to deny" or "would loathe denying"...I'm not 100% on that, but to me, that sentence sounds slightly weird. But I am no Grammar Queen, so don't quote me on that! ;)
I'll accompany Maglor on my trombone! ;) Of course, I'll need plenty of prior warning so I can practice up! And maybe while he's at it he can re-write the bass lines of my Christmas songbook? They suck something awful, and I forgot to bring it up with me to work on!
And with all that commotion about laces, maybe Maedhros should've brought along a pair of gold rings as well!!! ;)
*is evol*
“Does it bother you that Findekano and Nelyo have become such friends?”
Does it bother you, Makalaure??
(Ooh, Tarion is especially crazy/evol today!)
I guess I'll stop there because...I have class. Walk in the snow!
(That reminds me of last weeks peeing your name in the snow...I don't think I'm that talented ;P)
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Aww, shoot. No starting up a forge then, eh? ;)
I'm not 100% on that, but to me, that sentence sounds slightly weird.
It does sound weird! You are totally right! Funny thing is that I am a grammar goof--Bobby calls me the "English Goo-goo" where "goo-goo" is short for "goof"--but I can never spot errors in my own writing. So thanks much for noticing!
And maybe while he's at it he can re-write the bass lines of my Christmas songbook?
I'm sure he'd be happy to do it! However, as it seems I just allowed niothwen to adopt him, you'll have to ask her to borrow him.
Btw, I am cracking up at the notion of Macalaure on his harp and you standing at his side, playing the trombone!
And with all that commotion about laces, maybe Maedhros should've brought along a pair of gold rings as well!!! ;)
*is evol*
Evol? YOU?? Nevah!!! :^D
Does it bother you, Makalaure??
Macalaure just sniffed and said, "Of course not," and went back to packing his Christmas boxers for the move over to Niothwen's.
(That reminds me of last weeks peeing your name in the snow...I don't think I'm that talented ;P)
ROFL!! No, I don't think that's an undertaking for females. It would end up looking like some kind of bizarre dance, I think. And a high risk of ruining one's trousers!
*looks and realizes that Felak is wearing a skirt today*
*and there is still snow on the ground*
>:^)))
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No...*sigh* I read and read and read the rules, looking for a loophole, but nothing! Alas!
I can never spot errors in my own writing. So thanks much for noticing!
No problem! I have problems catching my own errors too...and when I do catch them, it's usually after I've printed the 7 page paper!
I'm sure he'd be happy to do it! However, as it seems I just allowed niothwen to adopt him, you'll have to ask her to borrow him.
Damn! Well, there's always FedEx!
Btw, I am cracking up at the notion of Macalaure on his harp and you standing at his side, playing the trombone!
I feel so loved...;P
Actually, it probably would be the funniest thing ever!
Especially because I'd probably be way to distracted to play anything!
Evol? YOU?? Nevah!!! :^D
Nope! Perfectly innocent!
*sings* Fiiiive golden riiiiiings!!!!
Macalaure just sniffed and said, "Of course not," and went back to packing his Christmas boxers for the move over to Niothwen's.
*Is momentarily distracted by "Christmas boxers", then recovers*
*Dory voice*
Denial...
No, I don't think that's an undertaking for females.
Agreed! Although, seeing that this is a college campus, people probably wouldn't be too surprised to see someone peeing their name in the snow!!
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