AMC--Chapter Twenty-Six
I am rating this chapter for adults only for reasons of discussing topics about sexuality. There is no graphic sex--it is merely Macalaurë musing about love and marriage and children and his thoughts on all of these things--but I want to play it safe. If you're not sure if you want to read this chapter, please don't hesitate to contact me, as
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I love Fëanor’s conversation with Macalaurë about Melkor and Macalaurë’s reflections on him. I love how you have shown the conflicting emotions within Fëanor - so quick to blame someone for something that angers or scares him - yet so quick to change to tenderness when he reconsiders.
“--- I was quite disgusted --- of putting my private parts inside of a girl and then peeing inside of her”. ROFLMAO! That’s exactly what I thought when I first heard about sex from a girlfriend! I was so sure she was lying! (I think we were only ten.)
“---mostly crying, screaming and shrieking---“ LOL! As it was so aptly put in the film “Maybe Baby” - “the shrieking, shitting and vomiting schedule (of a baby)!” LOL!
---her hand shoved down the front of his trousers. I’d been drawn by the thrashing and moaning, incorrectly assuming that Nelyo had injured himself and was crying out in pain. LOL! That is hilarious!!
I even awakened sometimes with an erection, but it had all the feeling of a broomstick! LOL! (And the size, too?) (Snerk - sorry - am feeling +++pervy today!)
Nelyo pawed at every willing female to enter the property. LOL!
I certainly wasn’t like Nelyo, who --- confessed to me that his favourite (body) part was actually his penis. ROFLMAO!!!!
Oh, wow, Dawn! *wipes tears from eyes* What a great chapter!!
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Feans is an impetuous guy. He acts before thinking things through fully. His first thought: It must be Macalaure's fault! So of course, he acts on that and gets regretful when it becomes painfully obvious that Macalaure is *not* to blame. It is no wonder that poor Macalaure struggles in his relationship with his father.
That’s exactly what I thought when I first heard about sex from a girlfriend!
Lol! I was lucky to have learned about sex early from studying entomology, and it became a necessity for my mom to explain "mating" to me. But I've heard all sorts of notions from people about what their first ideas of sex were. I remember an older cousin telling my other cousin and me about "head" when I was like ten...I was suitably horrified!
Who knew I'd grow into such a perv?
Interestingly, and this is a total tangent, I remember reading graphic sex scenes when I was a teenager for the first time (my sister and I used to swap books whenever we found them :^P) and thinking how wholly unnecessary they were to the story. And swearing that I, as a writer, would never succumb to such *primitive* urges in my own stories.
Okay, stop laughing.... ;^P
LOL! (And the size, too?) (Snerk - sorry - am feeling +++pervy today!)
You? Pervy?? :^O
I don't know about the size. Macalaure doesn't wantonly wave his around like Nelyo does! :^D
Oh, wow, Dawn! *wipes tears from eyes* What a great chapter!!
*offers tissue* Thank you! :)
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You know, I still giggle over the notion of "long foods"...you really did me in with that!
Oh no, I'm not pervy!
Me neither! Let's keep telling them that, and maybe they'll believe it! :^P
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Hey, there are all sorts of naughty candy molds, including penises of all shapes and sizes. And, of course, my personal favorite: the pile of crap! I had a really gross idea for that one, but I won't tell it to you unless you really want to know!
(Felak's going to try to behave now...*snickersnicker*...yeah right!)
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