"The Mirror," a.k.a. Alina's Naughty Feanor Story
For ann_arien is “The Mirror.” A funny thing happened with Alina’s request. Being one of my dearest friends, Alina gets stories for gifts whether she likes it or not. Because she was busy in a new job with no time to send me a request, I made a note next to her name in the file: “Alina: Fëanor; naughty.” A few weeks later, I got a comment from her,
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Being one of my dearest friends, Alina gets stories for gifts whether she likes it or not.
Oh, but she likes it! Very very much, she likes it. And she thakns you kindly for being such a great and creative! friend.
The drabbles remind me of a smutty little thing I wrote in the beginning of my drabbling days. It was 100 worth of Feany doing naughty things to himself while standing in front of the mirror. Only in my drabble, he was very young enjoying himself freely. Of course, the angst and the violence only serve to make the smut more hot and intense.
I set up mirrors everywhere to better watch him.
This, and the perspective that you have taken in the drabbles made me think that you may very well have written from... your POV, from mine... or even from (and now I'm being really bad) Melkor's. Yeah, it's almost as though Feanaro were trapped in a cage of mirrors, accepting his punishment and the humiliation of being watched, and yet pleasuring himself despite feeling ashamed. I'm not sure what you had in mind when writing the drabbles. It could also be that Feanaro is looking at himself both from within and outside of himself. Hope my blind groping doesn't make you laugh. :)
You really had me at Watched in the mirrors as he carefully caressed damaged flesh. Loved it. Kissed his wounds, lips red with blood as they’d once been with wine, Methinks I have a blood fetish. You think? >;)
Learned to command the pleasures of his body as she had, only his study took him in different directions, where pleasure lay on the boundaries of pain, where she’d never gone.
This is so... Feanaro. And I suppose it makes me that much the pervier to want to watch him doing these things to himself. Girl, you sure know how to tap into the dark&smutty fantasies of people (me!).
I will ramble no further (for I would rather return to the drabbles and enjoy them once more), except to thank you for the wonderful pressie and for letting me know what to get Feany for X-mas. Lots and lots of mirrors! *mwah*
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It could also be that Feanaro is looking at himself both from within and outside of himself. Hope my blind groping doesn't make you laugh. :)
Never! I intended it to be a bit enigmatic. My own thought is that he is watching himself. He both loves and loathes himself. He is studying to make a statue of himself, as Nerdanel had done, so that he may master himself as she had mastered him.
Of course, there are lots of ways to look at it. (I hadn't thought of Melkor, though I considered Erestor in a BtLoR!Alina!verse.) However you see it is how it is. :)
Methinks I have a blood fetish. You think? >;)
I put that in just for you, precioussss. >:^]]
letting me know what to get Feany for X-mas. Lots and lots of mirrors!
LMAO!!
You are so welcome. I'm really glad that you enjoyed your gift (though, really, I had no doubt :^P) and that the rest of the season treats you as well as you deserve. *hugs*
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