Test-Drive Chapter: "He Came Home"

[dawn_felagund]

I promised Tarion a while back that--no matter when AMC finally ended--that I would have a Friday posting for her until she left school to go home. Since AMC ended last week and Tarion has one Friday left before going home, I have decided to share the first five pages or so of my novella-in-progress "He Came Home

Comments

[tarion_anarore]

Squeeeeee!!!

This is such a good beginning! I can't wait for more, even though I'll have to.

And "HoME"?? Pah, it's like coins on the street. Sometimes you take 'em, sometimes you leave 'em! ;)
At least, that's what I do.

Oh, and I am pretty sure my uber-studying-like-hell for anatomy paid off!! :D

[dawn_felagund]

*squees* Is that why Nelyo came home rumpled and with a big grin on his face then? :^D

And "HoME"?? Pah, it's like coins on the street. Sometimes you take 'em, sometimes you leave 'em! ;)

Teehee, that is a great analogy! I shall have to try to remember it. :)

[tarion_anarore]

Is that why Nelyo came home rumpled and with a big grin on his face then? :^D

I have absolutely no idea what you could be referring to... 0;D

Teehee, that is a great analogy! I shall have to try to remember it. :)

I should make an icon out of it...

[dawn_felagund]

Oh, and thank you for reading and your comment! Daft me forgot the most important part of the comment reply.... ;^P

[tarion_anarore]

Of course! Always.

Besides, it'd look bad if I didn't read the last Friday story, after begging for it! ;)