FIC: When She Was Weird (PG-13, Dawn, Buffy/Angel) 1/1

[brencon]

Title: When She Was Weird
Summary: Buffy is acting just plain weird.
Word Count: 1,655
Characters: Dawn, Angel/Buffy.
Rating: PG-13
Author’s Notes: I snagged "When She Was Bad" for this challenge, so here’s how I think Dawn would’ve been involved in the episode. Thanks to Nikita for the beta.

Dawn was downtrodden. She and Buffy had just returned

Comments

[not_purrrfect]

That was so very good. You really got it right the way is should be and everything!

Brilliant.

[brencon]

Thanks! I was hoping I'd get it right.

[thistlerose]

Yay, first fic! I really like this. You captured the Dawn-Buffy-Angel dynamic very nicely. I could hear the three of them while reading this. Thank you!

[brencon]

Thanks! So glad it came across well!

[lilred26x]

Oh, I really liked this! I never particularly liked Dawn on the show. I really only started liking her in different fanfic that I read. This one is definitely one of the ones that makes me like her. So many of her comments here seemed so appropriate that I could here her say them. Thanks for sharing your fic!

[brencon]

I'm glad that I got her voice down right. Thanks for reading my fic!

[behrbemine]

It was sweet to see Angel protecting his lover's sister. Really shows that he loves every facet of Buffy's life. And I think it was something Dawn really needed, after feeling so neglected by her father, by Buffy, maybe by life. Someone out there cares for her, and I think she knows that's Buffy by the end. Good job. :)

[brencon]

I'm glad you picked up things that even I didn't realise until after I had finished it. Thanks for reading.

[lokifan]

Love it! The characterisation was great. Dawn was ADORABLE.

[brencon]

Thanks very much! I thought it was she was too. Love the icon!