Why Can't You Just Be Happy?

[davidp29]

Besides fighting with my dad, the last week was amazing...write about it later. Here's a poem I just wrote..never seem to have the time I want to spend on them, they all come out rushed. "Anyways" here it is. Appreciate those who read

Comments

[xface__downx]

That is so incredibly beautiful!

my favorite line is:
Much like a meteor shower drowned out by the wasteful city lights

Keep this up Dave! you're a great writer.

[davidp29]

(blushes) shucks lesley dont embarras me :). lol not as good as You, however i dont see much of your writings. Creative writing soon...

[xface__downx]

lol

I can't wait for creative writing class *dances*

[davidp29]

lol i just hope someone good teaches it..otherwise im dropping before it even begins.