Comments | david_squared: Permanent -- PG-13

fieryrogue in david_squared

Permanent -- PG-13

Feb 14, 2009 21:58

For all the kids out there like me who are sitting home, drinking jasmine tea, watching Food Network, writing Cookleta and remaining more or less disenchanted by Valentine's Day... At least let Cookleta enjoy it, will you?? <3 <3

[title] Permanent
[author] fieryrogue
[pairing] Cookleta
[beta] Nope.
[rating] PG-13 (language)
[word count] 1949
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Comments 16

aquagirl77 February 15 2009, 06:46:42 UTC

awww, this was extra adorable. And the ring and the bracelet sound so cool. Made me smile tonight!

fieryrogue February 15 2009, 07:10:49 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad! :D

courts February 15 2009, 06:49:35 UTC

awww, this is so freaking cute! love the gifts and Archie baking cookies and making lame jokes about it. They are way too adorable. Great job :)

fieryrogue February 15 2009, 07:12:56 UTC

Heee, thank you! Each idea made me giggle even more... I don't know how this stuff gets in my head, LOL. Also, your icon for the win!

clionona February 15 2009, 14:46:49 UTC

AWW!!!
Too adorable!!!
Loved Cook's frantic worrying and Archie's calm sweetness!!!

The gifts were lovely and Cook's declaration at the end was perfect!

Great job!

*applauds*

fieryrogue February 15 2009, 16:44:37 UTC

Hee! Yay, thank you! :D :D

rajkumari905 February 15 2009, 20:06:57 UTC

Archie looked horrified. "Is it? I mean, I don't really know how... how it goes."
I adored that line so much.
"You got me something?" Archie said, genuinely surprised. "What'd you do that for?"
Awwwwwwww.

And I loved the end a lot! <3

So sweet :)

fieryrogue February 16 2009, 04:40:41 UTC

Aww, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D :D

gypsy_ophelia February 15 2009, 20:48:50 UTC

I loved this- SO cute! Especially Cook's proposal- hee! He totally would propose that way too!

fieryrogue February 16 2009, 04:41:54 UTC

I know, don't you think he would? He would definitely say something silly!

Thank youuuuuu!!! :D