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fieryrogue in david_squared

Trouble With A Capital T -- NC-17

Feb 13, 2009 15:06

My first post! My first Cookleta ever! *unbelievably nervous*

[title] Trouble With A Capital T
[author] fieryrogue
[pairing] Cookleta
[beta] None. I've tried really hard to make sure everything's good from grammar to html though.
[rating] NC-17, Explicit, Language (because I just go for it, apparently, and now I'm slightly embarrassed because ( Read more... )

challenge #21

Comments 39

rajkumari905 February 14 2009, 00:03:07 UTC

Oh my gosh, this was totally awesome. I loved it.

fieryrogue February 14 2009, 03:29:53 UTC

Ooh, thank you so much. Your icon really makes me want to say, "I guess someone WAS likin' it." Hee! Ooh, Danny.

clionona February 14 2009, 00:23:49 UTC

OMG!
OMG!
OMG!

This is exactly what I was hoping for with that prompt!!!

*dances*

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! ♥!!!

This was sweet, real, intense and HOT - all rolled into one clever package! Thank you so much for writing and for sharing! =)

I hope to see a lot more fic from you in the future!

fieryrogue February 14 2009, 03:59:52 UTC

Aww, thank you so much! I'm happy to hear you thought it was all of those things, especially since I knew you were anticipating that prompt the most.

The escalating "OMG"s just helped my confidence a lot too. Hee! :D :D

willow_fae_20 February 14 2009, 01:37:25 UTC

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO MUCH LOVE. IT COULDN'T BE PROPERLY SHOWN IN SMALL CAPS. I LOVED THIS. THE TENSION. THE KOOKY ARCHULETA FAMILY. THE HOLY CRAP POOL TABLE SEX. EVERYTHING WAS PERFECT.

fieryrogue February 14 2009, 04:11:09 UTC

Thank you! I think one thing I'm quite happy with is my kooky Archuleta family, I guess because I didn't even know their names until I looked them up prior to writing this, LOL. A teenaged boy's worst enemy has got to be having three sisters, two who are quite younger than he and childish, the other trying to move in on his friends.

THANKS FOR THE CAPS LOCK, IT'S SO REWARDING! AND THANKS FOR THE TERM "HOLY CRAP POOL TABLE SEX". :D :D :D

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fieryrogue February 14 2009, 04:29:11 UTC

I like the idea that Archie is secretly a little more daring inside, he just doesn't know what to do with it, especially after growing up in the household that he did. Or at least, the way I assume he grew up, if you know what I mean.

Oh, I'm so glad Archie's mom came across well. I love moms who are the supporters and who don't ex-communicate their children in such situations. Most moms are this way in real life I think (or it's at least how I would hope most of them are), so it seems really real to me. :D

Thanks for your comments! <3

off_theground February 14 2009, 06:43:27 UTC

the best 9,209 words, like, everrrr. i love how you write everyone, especially lupe at the end <33 please say that this won't be your first and only post! ♥

fieryrogue February 14 2009, 08:13:08 UTC

Awww, you're so sweet! Don't worry, this is only the beginning! All this great feedback from you guys is really making me feel obligated to you guys now. Uh oh, pressure's on! LOL.