Week 3 comment
This week I commented on Shayne's short narrative
http://shayne-2016.livejournal.com/10121.html?thread=19593#t19593
""the needle and the damage done"
I enjoyed this piece, as MG said you've captured the process and feel of a person who knows themself. Your character is relatable..especially in regards to not throwing away his "fit", I think we all keep things put away both physically and mentally because we know we can go back to them at some stage for whatever reason.
Keep it up, your stuff has been among the most interesting so far!
Dave"
http://shayne-2016.livejournal.com/10121.html?thread=19593#t19593
""the needle and the damage done"
I enjoyed this piece, as MG said you've captured the process and feel of a person who knows themself. Your character is relatable..especially in regards to not throwing away his "fit", I think we all keep things put away both physically and mentally because we know we can go back to them at some stage for whatever reason.
Keep it up, your stuff has been among the most interesting so far!
Dave"