bored in class..

[darthrexious]

So I was in health and we were talking about....nothing I think.

Anyways, I started writing a song. anyone have ideas or critiques? let me know. its only the first half and a chorus....so maybe i'll finish it today in health. lol

We pass along the street,
you didn't know that we would meet,
a higher power made things go this way.
As I watched you walk by,
I let out a subtle sigh,
I had to figure out what I should say.

I said excuse me do you know the way to fourth street?
He looked around and then asked me where?
I repeated fourth street down by the apartments,
he smiled and said I'll take you there.

And i see you,
and I feel you,
I need to know what's on your mind.
And I want to,
to know you,
but your heart's too hard to find.

and scene.

lol
okay what about the next verse....any ideas ? if not, its okay. I can handle it myself.