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Dick and Roy shared a grin as they both laid down on either side of Tim. Dick cupped Tim's face up as he greedily claimed a kiss. He nibbled on Tim's lower lip till Tim opened his mouth with a sigh. Dick's tongue slid over Tim's as he mapped out Tim's mouth for what may have been the hundredth time, gliding and caressing over spots that had Tim panting into the kiss.
While Dick kissed Tim breathless, Roy peppered love bites along Tim's collarbone, nipping at the skin in short little bites and soothing them over with long sweeps of his tongue until he had Tim squirming beneath him. When Roy was satisfied with his work he slowly made his way up Tim's neck, kissing, biting, and licking until he reached Tim's ear. “You going to let Timmy breath anytime soon Short Pants?”
"Until the night that they shared a stakeout together. Until a kiss between them got the information that they needed to stop the arms shipment. Red Arrow had an odd combination of tastes, ranging from strong coffee, chili, lip balm, and . . . something else
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Once he overheard a conversation between Red Arrow and the Flash, where the subject of Robin came up. The change in Red Arrow's face was amazing, his eyes sparkled brightly, he stood up straighter, his smile became warmer. Geo-Force was intrigued. That intrigue turned into a real interest when he actually met Robin. Robin had accompanied Batman to the Hall of Justice one day, they were met by Red Arrow and Black Canary, if Geo-Force thought Red Arrow lit up when talking Robin he practically glowed when in the young man's presence. Geo-Force could understand why.
She had finally had got Jason to do something other than sulk during their walk, as she dragged him up to the hut that rented out toboggans . First the man had dropped the heavy sled on Jason's foot. Then Jason slipped on some ice on their way up to the toboggan run, falling he let slip of the sled, letting it fall on his foot again. The final insult was after their first run down the slope Jason failed to get out of the way and was bowled over by a group of giggling girls. Cass dragged him away before the girls could hear any of Jason's colorful language
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While Dick kissed Tim breathless, Roy peppered love bites along Tim's collarbone, nipping at the skin in short little bites and soothing them over with long sweeps of his tongue until he had Tim squirming beneath him. When Roy was satisfied with his work he slowly made his way up Tim's neck, kissing, biting, and licking until he reached Tim's ear. “You going to let Timmy breath anytime soon Short Pants?”
*falls off chair*
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Roy glanced over his shoulder with a smirk on his face. "Birdwatching," he said with a nod to the training room below.
Wally peered over Roy's shoulder, sighed, and shook his head, "That bird has a set of claws,"
"All the true pretty birds do Wally," Roy said, his smirk sliding into a smile.
"That 'pretty bird' has a temper."
"A temper, wits, cunning, daring, courage, beauty, . . ." Roy counted off each trait as Wally made gagging noises
"You're forgetting one, the ability to throw you around like a ragdoll."
"I was never attracted to wallflowers," Roy mused.
"Some people might not like the idea of you pursuing that bird," Wally said with a note of seriousness to his voice.
"I'm not afraid of Batman."'
I keep coming back to this one over and over again because I love the dialogue so very much.
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