WRITING CRITIQUE MEME

[darsynia]

While some may accuse me of doing this simply because I enjoyed the time spent coming up with the pretty green colors on the advertising link thingie, the truth is, I think a lot of us could use some critique, whether it's to bolster our egos for the task of finishing our mcshep_match and sgabigbang stories, or to help pinpoint reasons why we're struggling. But this isn

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[darsynia]

O HAI. darsynia

My Tags with my fanfiction, or click my website linkie--though there's two recent fics that aren't there yet, along with my behemoth tsik_inscribed.

HIT ME!

[grammarwoman]

It's a goofy thing to mention, I suppose, but I really appreciate how much you love writing, the gusto you impart to it. From the small details you obsess over (IMs don't lie *grin*) to the large scale stories you create, from the utter crack to the Siriusserious entries, they are all crafted with such love, enthusiasm, and of course, skill.

[wolfshark]

Me!

Most of my fic is here or here.

ETA - your code is borked, honey!

[jakisbishlygay]

Nice, descriptive, INTENSE porn. Leik woah.

Makes me fan myself and wonder if I'm going to hell for the naughty that consumes my brain long after I've finished reading.

[ladycat777]

Me, please. *girds loins*

Fic can be found via my tags, as I haven't updated my website in forever.

[ladycat777]

I think your use of language is evocative. Your characters always bleed through with emotion, whether they're having an intense conversation, hot sex, or just watching a movie together. I'm so glad that you keep writing.

[lynnenne]

I love your writing. I love the emotion your characters convey, strong and vivid and real without dipping into sentimentality. They love each other, yet they retain the emotional stuntedness that they displayed in canon. *g* You don't make the characters over into somebody else in order to tell the story you want. You just keep them as they are, and their stories are totally believable.

I love the way you paint a picture with your words. One of the things I love most is the inventive metaphors and imagery you come up with. I remember reading the phrase "broken radiator spreading rainbows underneath," and I thought, Damn. I never would have come up with that turn of phrase in a million years. And it was perfect. Really imaginative, inventive writing, and always a pleasure to read.

<3

[kallysten]

your imagery is the main reason why i come back to your fic over and over. whether it's PG or really kinky, you make the images really serve your story, they're not just there as shiny bits.

[kallysten]

*raises hand from the back*

my most recent fanfic is behind the tag

[darsynia]

I really, really enjoy the way you slowly revealed important details in Aria and Will. It's a gift to be able to peel away pages of story and discover interesting things, all at the same time knowing where some parts of the story will go--it wasn't predictable, and I loved that.

[mckays_girl]

Oh, me please :D

Here's my Fic List Master Post

[jakisbishlygay]

I absolutely adore you and your writing.

You indulge my inner crack-whore while not making the story crack itself (does that make sense? Like the plot is crack, yet the writing isn't? I don't think I can explain that properly, and I just confused myself.).

And even though I don't have the time to read much fanfic these days, the mere thought of you writing Supernatural Fic make me bounce with ENORMOUS JOY!

[mckays_girl]

You indulge my inner crack-whore while not making the story crack itself (does that make sense? Like the plot is crack, yet the writing isn't? I don't think I can explain that properly, and I just confused myself.).
No, I totally get it. Thank you!!

the mere thought of you writing Supernatural Fic make me bounce with ENORMOUS JOY!
Writing SPN makes ME bounce with enormous joy!! *squish*