Friend of my Friend Chapter 5.

[darkwyldchilde]

Title: Friend of my Friend

Comments

[ravenbull]

Wyld-

Fantastic chapter! You give Joss Whedon, as great as he was writing the amusing dialogue on BTVS, a run for his money...Followed your stories on k-k's website and consider myself lucky to have found you on LJ. Mixing The Lock w/NCIS...the possibilities are very intriguing. I look forward to more. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

Rave

[darkwyldchilde]

I wish I could claim credit on the humor, but about 90% was Lisa Countryman's when she handed me the script form of a dialogue scene that was in her head.

I fleshed it out a bit, added environment and texture, but it was when she sent it to me and I was cracking up I knew it had to be put in.

As far as the cross over... yeah I knew it had potential and it had been forming for a year or more, but when Lisa Countryman and I started talking fic, and Zabby in particular it finally started taking shape.

[silver_parpar]

HAHAHA i laughed through this whole chapter <3

[darkwyldchilde]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, though the lion share of the credit is Lisa Countryman's.

[darkwyldchilde]

I have to admit I didn't even think of his response. I just wanted to have Buffy throw in the proverbial towel.