Comments | darktrent182: FIC: House of Cards [Blackadder Goes Forth]

darktrent182

FIC: House of Cards [Blackadder Goes Forth]

Jan 31, 2006 18:14

TITLE: House of Cards
FANDOM: Blackadder
CHARACTERS: George Colthurst St. Barleigh, Anthony Cecil Hogmanay Melchett
PROMPT: #039. Taste
WORD COUNT: 994
RATING: R
SUMMARY: A moment of weakness, and it all came down like a house of cards.
AUTHOR'S NOTES: Close to smut, but no cigar. Le sigh. Melchett's POV, third-person limited, I believe.

( The door opened, and it all went downhill from there. )

fanfic100, blackadder

Comments 12

polypragmosyne February 1 2006, 20:38:42 UTC

It's lovely and powerful...

leaper182 February 1 2006, 21:30:01 UTC

*blink*

Thanks. :D

edna_blackadder February 1 2006, 22:32:57 UTC

Squeeeeeeeeeeeee.

Wow, least helpful comment ever. But it's all I can manage, because, well SQUEE.

leaper182 February 2 2006, 02:33:19 UTC

If ever you want to leave a helpful comment, tell me if they're IC or not, if the situation is plausible or not, and if you liked it.

That's enough for me. ;)

montycrowley February 3 2006, 21:27:51 UTC

BUHAAA. "You've got me pinned to the wall." Love, love, love. Excellent descriptions of George, too.

leaper182 February 3 2006, 23:38:08 UTC

*beams*

I thought it would be something George would say. I'm glad you liked that part because I liked writing it. ;)

willdew March 22 2008, 01:18:54 UTC

*melts into a puddle of goo*

That was so heart-stoppingly erotic. I feel faint and out of breath just reading this.

The charged nature of the confrontation/encounter is really... it's got a compelling sort of energy to it. The whole theme of reluctant arousal and unstoppable sense of repressed desire bursting out and so forth.

It was hilarious when Melchett goes from thinking of him looking "more stupid than usual" to being a "little minx."

oliviazaratinga March 28 2008, 02:57:23 UTC

Oh, yeah. I could see this. I could see how Melchett would give into temptation, and be okay with it until he's reminded that George was Georgina, and made a fool out of him. (Admittedly, George didn't do that on purpose, but Melchett wouldn't see it that way.) I think it's interesting that Melchett spoke to, and threw out, George the same way that George did to Bob. That was a nice echo, and another bit of genderfuckery too. Poor, poor, sweet George, though. The love of his life is Melchett, for God's sake. (Oh, enjoyed the physical description of George. Yum.)