Tell me goodbye

[darkmyvpleasure]

Little something I wrote during my shift at work when sudden inspiration hit me. It's not a fanfic nor has it something to do with Jrock itself. It's just a short little piece.

Comments

[uruha1]

So beautyful ... You have a wonderful way with words ... So romantic and still longing for the eternal touch to keep it safe into ones heart ... Smoothing words floating along the feeling within the meaning of love ... So true and so real for everyone to dwell in ...
I hope you are ok and not anymore suffering of a lost love or other things puzzling your mind ... Please take care ... You are a very talented writer ... *dreaming in romantic after thoughts*

[darkmyvpleasure]

Thank you very much for your words. I apreciate every one of them. <3 I try to lean as much as possible to realism so, I hope I did well with this one.
I'm alright but there are always different topics that worry me. But nothing like a lost love, I don't believe in erotic love. Thank you very much even if I don't consider it a talent. I haven't spent much time writing and I still have my doubts.

[inspiring_light]

Beautiful and sad at the same time but nevertheless I enjoyed reading it. Though I have to ask 'cause my curiosity is getting the best of me is this related, in any way, with something that truely happened? I'm asking this because, sometimes I get inspired when sad, unpleasant things happen. I hope you're fine and nt heartbroken at the moment.

[darkmyvpleasure]

Thank you very much and I'm very glad you enjoyed it. I know, and I am inpired by a lot of terrible things that have happened in my life as well and most of my fics are based on them more or less. But this one, I can assume you, is not. I don't believe in erotic love so, this was pure imagination. Thank you for reading tho. I appreciate it.

[decemberyume]

It's so beautiful, beautiful as a melodic song with amazing lyrics...it kinda remind me of a song by SID, Sleep, it is, a song I like to replay from time to time O(∩_∩)O
I really like your writing<3 amazing fanfics as well as the prose-poems created by you, please write and share more *cookies*

[darkmyvpleasure]

Thank you very much. And I love that song. I will replay it a lot of times if I have the chance. ^^
Thank you! However, now I doubt I will have any time to write/post a lot. *takes them anyway*