I can't even form coherent thoughts right now. Let alone a coherent review! Eleven and Claudia! Seriously, this does not need the romance angle, the fact that these two personalities are interacting is enough to make this a MUST read! I will be back momentarily, when I'm not lying in a heap on the ground, basking in the afterglow of this chapter.
P.S. I read Claudia and Eleven now. Claudia and Eleven is COOL! :DDDDDD
"Holy outer space, Batman,"So much love for this line! It's so Claudia and, good Goddess, this whole fic is just PERFECT! I know that's not very helpful to the author, but seriously, I just love the spot on characterization, the plot, the dialogue, everything! Like I said in my first comment, this is so brilliant, it does not even need The Doctor/Companion romance angle. (Although, I wouldn't be adverse to a guest appearance by Fargo...just sayin'.) But really, whatever they are about to do, if you just keep writing it as you already have, it will be perfect without the romance (one sided or not) aspect. (Which is a little overdone after Rose, Martha, Amy, River, and all the other women Ten had in between anyway, to be honest.) Also, the other thing that would be cool is if Eleven (since he knows past and future by skipping around all the time), alluded to Claudia's future importance (as the caretaker of Warehouse 14). Of course it doesn't need to be said, but now that The Doctor knows her name and knows
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This is like...the greatest review in the history of ever. I am definatly going to take everything you've written into consideration for the next installment, all I need to do is figure out what the plot is.
But really this is the best review I've ever gotten and it's totally go me pumped to write more. :D
I feel I've done my job as an effective reviewer then. :D Hehe.
I am definatly going to take everything you've written into consideration for the next installment, all I need to do is figure out what the plot is.
Can I just suggest maybe a wacky plot involving a historical? I really liked it when The Doctor tempted her with meeting the people who are responsible for the artifacts in The Warehouse. (*cough*Marilyn Monroe*cough* Okay, okay, admittedly, that one probably made me grin because I was just in L.A. a couple weeks ago for a taping of Conan and we went to the Grauman's Chinese Theater and I got to find and take pictures of Marilyn's handprints. :P) But seriously, I think it would be cool if he took her to meet someone who invented something in The Warehouse. Especially if it was an artifact she and/or we have encountered in The Warehouse in the past, so we can see how it "came into existence" or something cool like that.
BTW, I'm not sure who is in your icon, but it makes me giggle each time "fabulous" appears in his hands.
I can't even form coherent thoughts right now. Let alone a coherent review! Eleven and Claudia! Seriously, this does not need the romance angle, the fact that these two personalities are interacting is enough to make this a MUST read! I will be back momentarily, when I'm not lying in a heap on the ground, basking in the afterglow of this chapter.
P.S. I read Claudia and Eleven now. Claudia and Eleven is COOL! :DDDDDD
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"Holy outer space, Batman,"So much love for this line! It's so Claudia and, good Goddess, this whole fic is just PERFECT! I know that's not very helpful to the author, but seriously, I just love the spot on characterization, the plot, the dialogue, everything! Like I said in my first comment, this is so brilliant, it does not even need The Doctor/Companion romance angle. (Although, I wouldn't be adverse to a guest appearance by Fargo...just sayin'.) But really, whatever they are about to do, if you just keep writing it as you already have, it will be perfect without the romance (one sided or not) aspect. (Which is a little overdone after Rose, Martha, Amy, River, and all the other women Ten had in between anyway, to be honest.) Also, the other thing that would be cool is if Eleven (since he knows past and future by skipping around all the time), alluded to Claudia's future importance (as the caretaker of Warehouse 14). Of course it doesn't need to be said, but now that The Doctor knows her name and knows ( ... )
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But really this is the best review I've ever gotten and it's totally go me pumped to write more. :D
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I am definatly going to take everything you've written into consideration for the next installment, all I need to do is figure out what the plot is.
Can I just suggest maybe a wacky plot involving a historical? I really liked it when The Doctor tempted her with meeting the people who are responsible for the artifacts in The Warehouse. (*cough*Marilyn Monroe*cough* Okay, okay, admittedly, that one probably made me grin because I was just in L.A. a couple weeks ago for a taping of Conan and we went to the Grauman's Chinese Theater and I got to find and take pictures of Marilyn's handprints. :P) But seriously, I think it would be cool if he took her to meet someone who invented something in The Warehouse. Especially if it was an artifact she and/or we have encountered in The Warehouse in the past, so we can see how it "came into existence" or something cool like that.
BTW, I'm not sure who is in your icon, but it makes me giggle each time "fabulous" appears in his hands.
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