LOL. It seems like whatever the case, it isn't going to work itself out that easily yet. Trust the hime-sama to put himself in a position to suffer more angst. LOL.
Right now, I think he'd just be satisfied if he can just receive a clear message from our resident rapper. So far, it's just mixed signals all over the place. Angst much? LOL. Aren't I mean to the one who baited me to the group in the first place?
Thank you for being so patient. Now, to worry about the next part which is scattered all over. Argh! :)
Am trying to incorporate a few more RL events according to sequence for the next few parts, and they seem to be arranging themselves in order, so let's see how that turns out.
Thanks for greenlighting mentions of Maki. Wasn't initially sure if it would work out, but the fits seems okay.
As for Sho, well, let's just say there's a reason for his "cluelessness". LOL.
Love your comments, and definitely working on more. RL is sweet as well, what with the sakumoto moments that trigger my writing juices. :)
I don't think you'll be that pleased with me when you see the speed with which you see me updating. RL intrudes into the precious time I'd want to reserve for creative writing. Argh.
Even when the two of them try to talk nothing really gets resolved! Very interested to see if anything happens here with Maki, and if Sho's even going to get a clue any time soon!
This is just a stylistic preference on my part, but don't be afraid to just use their names. I honestly didn't know who 'dark-haired man child' was and just guessed you meant Nino?
Really, you'd have thought once they actually to talk face to face, the misunderstandings would be cleared up, and then this happens. LOL.
As for Sho getting a clue, let's just say our Keio-boy still has that certain amount of *innocence* that just makes my heart go "Oh, Sho..."
Oh no! You outted me. Guiltily, I'll admit that the omission was intentional. As if two in the mix isn't enough in this angst-fest, now I'm dragging in another member, but OTP of course demands it's more BFF-nature involvement. LOL... Is it really Nino? LOL *silly alien LOLs wickedly and dashes off before Jaime bricks her*
Thanks always for your franks and constructive comments. Hearts to you! :) :) :)
No, I was genuinely confused, LOL. I am not a fan of epithets at all, hahaha. I find it jarring. I wouldn't call Sho 'the rapper' unless he is actually rapping at the time. I'd just say 'Sho' :)
Think of it this way. If I was writing a story where I was the main character, would I be writing "the librarian" in place of Jamie if the story had nothing to do with me shelving books and/or answering reference queries? Hee! But again, that's how I prefer to write. I'm just being honest.
Oh wow. I never thought of it like that; was worrying if it'd be boring just simply repeating the names over n over - not that anyone would gets sick of THEIR names. LOL. I guess it really does make sense in a way. Definitely keep that in mind for future writing. <3 <3 again for your generous feedback. :) :)
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The wait was worth it, by the way!! I'll wait as long as it takes for the next part &hearts
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Thank you for being so patient. Now, to worry about the next part which is scattered all over. Argh! :)
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i like the way you incorporated the RL events into this, especially using Maki-chan as the issue that made jun snap.
sho being so clueless, i don't know whether to feel exasperated at him, or feel bad for him.
needless to say - more :D!
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Thanks for greenlighting mentions of Maki. Wasn't initially sure if it would work out, but the fits seems okay.
As for Sho, well, let's just say there's a reason for his "cluelessness". LOL.
Love your comments, and definitely working on more. RL is sweet as well, what with the sakumoto moments that trigger my writing juices. :)
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thanks for the update and the awesome story~
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Thanks for the comments. :)
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This is just a stylistic preference on my part, but don't be afraid to just use their names. I honestly didn't know who 'dark-haired man child' was and just guessed you meant Nino?
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As for Sho getting a clue, let's just say our Keio-boy still has that certain amount of *innocence* that just makes my heart go "Oh, Sho..."
Oh no! You outted me. Guiltily, I'll admit that the omission was intentional. As if two in the mix isn't enough in this angst-fest, now I'm dragging in another member, but OTP of course demands it's more BFF-nature involvement. LOL... Is it really Nino? LOL *silly alien LOLs wickedly and dashes off before Jaime bricks her*
Thanks always for your franks and constructive comments. Hearts to you! :) :) :)
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Think of it this way. If I was writing a story where I was the main character, would I be writing "the librarian" in place of Jamie if the story had nothing to do with me shelving books and/or answering reference queries? Hee! But again, that's how I prefer to write. I'm just being honest.
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