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I so want the NaNoWriMo black hoodie. ♥ Black, simple design, full-length zip and pockets. From the looks of it, humongous pockets! ♥~
As troublesome the scene between Paizinel, Marland and Poss is, I kind of find it adorable. X3 Marland flailing, and Pai continually poking poor, panicking Poss and - and - eeeeee!
Unfortunately, I'd wanted to have Poss and Shodin talk slightly distinctly from each other, where Poss never uses contractions. But, well, under pressure, he talks faster, right? So, Poss uses contractions in that bit. Because it sounded so damn awkward when he wasn't.
The conversation is flowing okay, but the topics I wanted to be covered here kinda got shoved to the back. Unless Shodin brought it up (which would have been reasonable) in the middle of a conversation it, wouldn't have worked. But, he does keep things close to his chest so... yeah.
I keep using quotation marks instead of -' '- when Pai's talking and it's annoooooyiiiiing.
Discovered another trick to get me to write more: close all the other tabs apart from the one of WriteorDie. I use Maxthon, so you can switch between tabs by pressing crtl+arrow, which leads to such thoughts like, 'Eh, okay, I've done my little batch, I'll just go to this tab for a few seconds...' Obviously, doesn't work. :P
After the scene I'm currently on, I'll be on the [2 or 3 days pass and Marland and Shodin get to know each other better I hope] bit of my plan. XDD;; Aaaaah, that's going to be interesting to see.
*frowns at Marland* I think he's too relaxed. Or maybe it's because he's home, a place he considers to be relatively safe, with a friend that he's known for years - and Shodin's asleep. XD;
Ooor Marland's still vaguely under the influence of the drugs/poison. I kinda love blaming that, don't I? XDD;;
And yet another edit! About the blank days coming up. I've mostly finished the scene now and it's sort of slowing down now. Yey? Nice quiet scene filled with more poking on Pai's part. XD Anyway, Marland's stuck being wide-awake, what with him being asleep for most of the night so he needs something to dooo. And I maybe hopefully sorta having something to do, but... idunno, maybe seems out of character? Idunno. Anyway, he's got to be up for hours so he's got to do something in that time!
I know! He can watch tv! Wait, why does this sound familiar? Oh. ... Ooooooh. *___* This, could be very fun to write. XDD It probably won't, but the mental image is hilarious for me