Missing You, 5/5, Spike/Xander, PG-13

Jun 28, 2008 22:25

Author: darkhavens
Title: Missing You #5 - The End and A Beginning
Fandom: Pairing: Buffy: Spike/Xander
Rating: PG-13
Words: 2x100 (1000 overall)
Spoilers: You know how Buffy ended, right?
Concrit: Please. If you spot a typo, please feel free to tell me in comments.
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
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Missing You #5 - The End and A Beginning iadorespike June 28 2008, 21:52:33 UTC
Eeeeeeee!!!! That's just perfect!!!! I DO worship you...I DO! I was expecting to see Spike, but you ended it with another NOTE FROM SPIKE!! You clever thing, you. *beams*

Thank you so, so much. And, um...sorry for the rather rampant abuse of exclamation points. Oops. ;)

Anna *twirls you*

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Re: Missing You #5 - The End and A Beginning darkhavens June 28 2008, 22:12:33 UTC
Hee! Thank you!

This final Spike note has been writing itself in my head since the beginning. I knew I had to end with it, and there was no way I could do real justice to the actual reunion in Xander's 100 words, so I dragged Andrew in for a babbling cameo instead. *g*

Also, I have been known to abuse exclamation points myself. ;)

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Re: Missing You #5 - The End and A Beginning iadorespike June 28 2008, 23:07:59 UTC
Speaking of Andrew, in one and a half lines you had him down cold. You amaze me. And of course he'd bargain to keep the plates in payment for information - as if Xander wasn't willing to give about anything to find out what was going on by this time. *snicker*

I've said it before, but I'll say it again...no one can tell as complete a story in as few words as well as you do. You are the reigning queen of the drabble and, yes, the double drabble. Long may you reign!

*hugs you tight*

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Re: Missing You #5 - The End and A Beginning darkhavens June 28 2008, 23:40:26 UTC
Thank you!

Andrew could be an annoying little dweeb sometimes, but he has a very distinctive 'voice'.

My drabblequeen crown is well and truly out of storage. *g*

{{hugs}}

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anxiety_junkie June 28 2008, 22:15:09 UTC
Very nice. Your Spike voice is always perfect. And I love the whole note concept! *g*

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darkhavens June 28 2008, 23:43:05 UTC
Thank you!

My Spike-fu is strong right now. He's always nattering on about something. *g*

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darthsindel1981 June 28 2008, 22:35:24 UTC
yes yes and even more yes loved that

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darkhavens June 28 2008, 23:43:34 UTC
Thank you! :D

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darkhavens June 28 2008, 23:43:45 UTC
Hee! Thanks!

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kimalis June 28 2008, 23:41:22 UTC
Brilliance!!!
Love the concept of the notes, especially the final one.

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darkhavens June 28 2008, 23:46:17 UTC
Thank you!

I love the idea of Spike retaining William's penmanship and his letter-writing skills, something I am sure that all Victorian gentlemen were taught early on. *g*

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