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darkblysse

Seeing The Dark Of You, Chapter Three

Jan 27, 2009 02:40

Title: Seeing The Dark Of You, Chapter Three
Rating: NC-17
Type: Yaoi, A/U
Pairings: Roy/Ed
Warnings: Anal, wet dream
Summary: With Ed's 18th birthday quickly approaching, his infatuation with Roy starts taking over more and more of his life. What will Ed do when that blessed day finally arrives?

A/N: No, that is not Ed's real birthday! Nobody ( Read more... )

roy/ed, fma fanfic, fanfic

Comments 28

nochick_fics January 27 2009, 12:54:21 UTC

Once again, you do a kick ass job with first person POV.

Wonderful storytelling. Looking forward to more.

xoxo

darkblysse January 27 2009, 19:01:50 UTC

Thanks so much, dear! ^__^ I'm glad you like it. <333

jeeperscreeperz January 27 2009, 16:57:49 UTC

i don't think i should have read this before going to class. now i feel...agitated. :D

i think i got spoiled with all those stories you released at once because the past few days i've been checking my friends page like crazy lol.

this was such a nice chapter and i was grinning like a idiot when ed got that note. oh roy. *sigh* and the lemon whew. it was short and sweet and to the point. damn.

i saw you had an account on FF with all these stories. would you rather get reviews there then here? i have an account on there so its no big deal if you would rather get them there and hike up your review count. i'll even go through and re-review the old ones if you like. (that's just how much i ♥ you *nods*) XD

darkblysse January 27 2009, 19:04:29 UTC

Yeah, that was kind of a long break between stories. ^_^; But only because I had some bad news this week and it took me a while to get back into my writing groove. But I should be a little more speedy now that I've worked everything out. <3

And I don't care one hoot about my review count on FF.net. 'S just a number. I know you guys like my stuff. ^_~

greedy_lover January 27 2009, 19:07:48 UTC

I demand more of this and soon XD I'll bug you in the chat for more too, if I have too XD I love it a lot ^^

darkblysse January 27 2009, 19:15:56 UTC

D'aw, you're so sweet. xDDD

And I'm in the chat now, get your arse back in there! *Shakefist*

sirkrunk741 January 27 2009, 19:58:35 UTC

That was just... GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH.

darkblysse January 27 2009, 20:21:41 UTC

It was, wasn't it? ^_~

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darkblysse January 27 2009, 21:49:00 UTC

XD Thanks a ton, dear! ILU! *Friend-ily*