Rise & Shine

May 05, 2009 05:34


Title: Rise & Shine
Rating: NC-17
Type: Het
Pairings: Ed/Femme!Al
Warnings: Smut, genderswitch, Elricest

A/N: I blame doujinshi (lol, the one Spandy bought me XD) and roleplays for this. >_>; Also... I don't know if I even did this right. XD Do I still call Al... Al, as a girl? O_O I-I assume so? Even if it's a little odd... XD; S-So yeah... ( Read more... )

fma, elricest, fanfic

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peace_of_hope May 5 2009, 15:04:51 UTC
It's been a while since I've seen gswitch elricest. I usually don't like it, but I liked this one! <3

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darkblysse May 5 2009, 22:34:44 UTC
^///^ I'm glad you liked it, hon!

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ayaogicesthime May 5 2009, 16:00:19 UTC
Awsome work very neatly done.

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darkblysse May 5 2009, 22:34:52 UTC
Thanks! :D

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alanna214 May 5 2009, 22:06:54 UTC
I will say it was well written. I don't usually read het anymore. The fact that Al is a girl in this one slightly weirds me out actually. That sounds kinda strange considering I like the all boy version better. Heh... ^_^'

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darkblysse May 5 2009, 22:52:57 UTC
Thanks so much! ^_^

And... it took me a while to get used to Al... having boobs and all, too. >//> Which is why I still haven't tried to proof/re-read this. XD;

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kookiety May 5 2009, 22:25:14 UTC
No Blysse, no! You dragged to me to the Elricest side! Don't drag me to fem!Al!
... *curses*... ZOMG. Het! O_O

And I liked it! Found it quite hot... T'was nice <3

And - I think the names are supposed to stay the same - so yup - Alphonse :)

Well written, hon - you're getting scarily good at fickies :)

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darkblysse May 5 2009, 22:53:45 UTC
^//^ Thanks, hon! :D I'm glad it turned out hot! XDD I honestly had no idea what I was doing or if it had turned out well. Dx

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baroqueangel May 5 2009, 22:31:44 UTC
First time writing Het?? You sure??

That was really good, I tend to avoid gswitch but I couldn't avoid this one. The ending was perfect, trust Ed to fall asleep after that XD

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darkblysse May 5 2009, 22:55:03 UTC
Haha, I'm sure! XD Het... tends to scare me. >//>;

And I had to end it like that! XD It was just too... perfect. XDD

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