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darkblysse

Seeing The Dark Of You, Chapter Ten (Real one, lol)

Apr 04, 2009 01:14

Title: Seeing The Dark Of You, Chapter Ten (For real this time! XD)
Rating: PG-13 (NC-17 overall)
Type: Yaoi, A/U
Pairings: Roy/Ed, Elricest
Warnings: Teensy bit of violence, Elricest
Summary: With Ed's 18th birthday quickly approaching, his infatuation with Roy starts taking over more and more of his life. What will Ed do when that blessed day ( Read more... )

fma, roy/ed, elricest, fanfic

Comments 21

sirkrunk741 April 4 2009, 08:45:55 UTC

Not what I was expecting, but I should've known better. It's you, after all. Either way, I approve. It's a great conclusion to the epicness that has been this story.

*two thumbs up*

darkblysse April 4 2009, 08:53:35 UTC

*Cling* I love you so hard right now. I'm so glad you like the ending, dear! >_<;

sirkrunk741 April 4 2009, 09:22:50 UTC

I love it so much. It's very very very very good. x1000. Which is a lot. <3

darkblysse April 4 2009, 09:28:16 UTC

OhGodyouricon. XD <3

And thank you X10000000. Which is more than a lot. -3-;

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blackspandex April 4 2009, 08:55:01 UTC

Well Blysse I'm sad to see this fic at an end, but all good things do have to eventually do that - don't they? I kinda figured you'd head the Elricest route, but its okay Roy fans Jean was there to pick up the pieces LOL *coughotpcough ( ... )

darkblysse April 4 2009, 09:30:40 UTC

*Dies from blushing too much. >///<;;*

*Whines* Spaaaaandy, I don't know how to reply to that. ;-; Because every time I read it it just makes me want to cry and huggle you to death.

I do have to say, though, that a good chunk of my improvement has come from you encouraging me and giving me all these wonderful, helpful comments. You've no idea how much it helps. <3

And hon... you can be on my back any time you like. ;D XD

vivimage April 4 2009, 16:45:38 UTC

\o/! I'm sort of glad you didn't add the sexing at the end. That's really the perfect ending for this amazingly awesome story. And yaaay, Alphonse doesn't have to give sad looks anymore; he can be happy! :3

I'd love for the bonus chapter with the sexing, though~ And a follow-up would be cool, in my opinion. I like to see how things go after the story ends.

<3

darkblysse April 4 2009, 18:32:51 UTC

Thanks so much, hon! I'm so glad you were pleased with the ending. <3 And yes, now Alphonse can give all of the sweet, sappy looks to Edward that he wants! \o/ XD;

<3

baroqueangel April 5 2009, 00:23:23 UTC

Should have seen that one coming XD Love the ending, you're slowly turning me to the elricest, I don't think I'm ready to write it but I love reading yours :)

My favourate part was the slap, I was cheering XP

darkblysse April 5 2009, 01:10:41 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it, dear! \o/ <3 And you're not the only one... I've been converting a few people over to Elricest. XD

And yeah, the slap was pretty awesome. I giggled when I wrote it, just seeing Roy's face. XD

night_childe25 April 5 2009, 06:23:50 UTC

As sad as I am that Roy was a huge asshole and my favorite pairing just didn't work out in this story I still love it to bits. I figured it would go this way. It was awesome and I do hope you do another chapter just for Ed and Al's time together. I really enjoyed it. <3

darkblysse April 5 2009, 08:33:26 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it, dear. And it looks like, from everyone's opinions, I'm going to be writing that chapter. ^_^ <3