Seeing The Dark Of You, Chapter Seven

[darkblysse]

Title: Seeing The Dark Of You, Chapter Seven
Rating: NC-17
Type: Yaoi, A/U
Pairings: Roy/Ed, one-sided Elricest
Warnings: Implied Elricest, smut, masochism
Summary: With Ed's 18th birthday quickly approaching, his infatuation with Roy starts taking over more and more of his life. What will Ed do when that blessed day finally arrives?

A/N: Aaaaaaand, I

Comments

[blackspandex]

PENISPENISPENIS.

Okay that's out of my system.

^__^ As I said on messenger I really do enjoy your ability to draw a reader into the story itself. Even if it's porn or not, the first beginnings weren't, it was a poor little brother longing for the love of something that was just out of his reach. Literally. It's well portrayed and its not just one long line of slurring words for sex.

It's hot, and its fresh, and it's REFRESHING that there's a bit of Roy/Ed out there that doesn't just make me go "Wow. Another Roy and Ed sex scene *Yawn*". Your story actually made me not skip paragraphs until something fun happened LOL. There's very few ( but some! ) that I don't do that with ( mostly random people on fic sites ).

Anyway
longstoryshort
I liked it.
Thank you for sharing it.

But reference to the Avatar.

[darkblysse]

Eeeee, your comments always make my day! (Or night, as the case is right now! XD;;)

I'm so happy that you're focusing on more than just the sex! ^_^;; That really was my intention from the start, to have some little bit of intrigue and actual story behind all of the smut.

And euh, I know what you mean. T_T So many Roy/Ed fics are just... bland. But woot for refreshing pr0nz! \o/

♥

[vivimage]

I do enjoy waking up to a new fic up, especially yours. <3

Your sex scenes are always 'liek whoooaa...' (and this was no different), and I oh, so loved the...maybe the beginnings of doubt from Edward, with that "Or maybe he just knows what works on everyone... because Roy Mustang gets around..." line. Looovely...

I am hoping that maybe Ed will...possibly force them to actually talk about their 'relationship', seeing as they haven't really. xD

And Al...can't forget the little brother....I just have one word: sob.

I can't wait to see what'll happen in the next chapter! :3

[darkblysse]

*Attacks with huggles!*

Aw, thanks so much, hon! :D I'm glad you liked that little seed of doubt I planted in Ed's mind. It's definitely going to keep growing, too. ^_~

*Huggles more.* I know, I made the Al part so sad. ;-;

I'll try to update, ASAP for the next chapter, too! ^_^

[night_childe25]

I'm so glad to see an update to this! ^^ I always love reading your stories. Loved it and can't wait for more.

[darkblysse]

Thanks so much, hon! ^_^ <3 I promise to be more speedy with the next update, too! ^_^;

PS: Matching icons! \o/ XD;

[dragonimp]

Looks like there's a few messed-up relationships here XD. But, hooboy, the sex, it is hot!

[darkblysse]

Hahaha, definitely some unhealthy relationships going on here. xD; And the sex will only get hotter, hon! ;D

PS: Goddamnit, someone's trying to outbid me for your fic! )<

[baroqueangel]

I think I need a cold shower after that XD

I feel so sorry for Al but I can't wait to see more Roy/Ed, especially with Ed now showing doubt.

[darkblysse]

Haha, your wish is my command, Angel. ^_~ I'm actually typing up the sex scene for chapter eight right now! \o/