Fucking With Yourself

[darkblysse]

Title: Fucking With Yourself
Author: Blysse
Prompt: Full Metal Alchemist (anime), Ed!Envy/Ed: non- or dub-con - "Go fuck yourself." "You know, the funny thing about being a shapeshifter is that I can actually do that."
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Non-con, language, Envy being a creepy motherfucker, mindfuck, selfcest, and a teensy bit of incest if you

Comments

[amelia_seyroon]

Bwahahaha, Ed has been fooling with both his brother and Roy and Winry, and Envy knows it. Little pimp. 8D

Roy is worse, sleeping with half of Central, of course he would!

[darkblysse]

Ah, he wasn't fooling around with Al ;) Just brotherly love here and trying to keep Al safe in the platonic sense that Envy was referring to. But yes, Ed's a whore for Roy and God knows who else XD

And of course Envy knows! How knows everything. All the better to shatter your hope when he's bruising your body.

[sunsingergirl]

OH. MY. FUCKING. GOD.

This was utterly disturbing. I honestly think that you did a fantastic job with the non-con; it's really hard to write for a lot of people, myself included. This... brought up some bad memories, but nothing I can't deal with. Your description was absolutely flawless, and I felt Edward's pain. *grimace*

That ending line was superb, summing up the entire gruesome depiction so nicely. Very well done.

[darkblysse]

*Hugs*

Thanks for the feedback. I've never written detailed non-con, so this was a real shot in the dark for me. I just... started going, and Envy ran away with me, I had no idea if it was good or not dfhjfsg. But apparently I did it right! :'D Disturbing, you say? I was aiming for just that~

And thank God, the ending came through so well, I'm always a bit flaily with ending my fics.

*A thousand more hugs, feedback is such love ;-;* <333

[alanna214]

Oh my... I really like this. (I kind of wish it was longer ^^") But I almost feel bad liking it because Ed really got the short end of the stick this time. XD I feel horrible for Ed. !_! I just want Al or Roy to huggle him and make it all better.

And this “WHO ARE YOU CALLING SO SHORT THAT HE GETS STEPPED ON LIKE A BUG ALL THE FUCKING TIME AND ENJOYS IT, YOU SICK SADISTIC FUCK?!” had me laughing soooo hard! Love it. <3

I'm also very happy to see that you're still writing and very awesomely at that. \^_^/ Thank you for posting this.

[darkblysse]

Haha, I had to have a short rant in there XD I couldn't have the whole length of this thing be so creepy and fucked up.

Oh, it feels so good to be writing again, you have no idea. I've already got another fic started, and with this writing kick that I've been on, well... *Crosses fingers.* Maybe we'll see it out this week?

[alanna214]

*crosses fingers, too* ^_^

[geechan]

Envy approves. :D

[darkblysse]

<33;

[sexkitten426]

You managed to capture the mindfuck that is Envy perfectly. Not many can imagine getting raped by themselves, of all people, but Ed's gonna have nightmares of that for a long time to come, I'm sure.

[darkblysse]

I'm so relieved that this is going over well, since this fic was full of firsts for me! XD; My first time writing Envy, my first time writing rape. I daresay this might just give me that boost of confidence I sorely need to get working on that non-con Roy/Al fic that's been gathering dust for well over a year now, heh.

<3

[sexkitten426]

Dooo eeet! XD